really good. thanks for the read.

I'm quite intrigued by the premise of your story (if a little confused by that last part...). I loved the interaction between Renji and Rukia - it felt just right - and how Ichigo and Orihime were portrayed, though I am curious as to how they ended up in California...

In short, more please?

...is this story abandoned? Please, please write more!

Very intriguing. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

I'm very intrigued with this story and I really like your style of writing. The simplicity leads me to infer many things. It almost reminds me of a poem, as many emotions and possible meanings are expressed ambiguously with few words. I have read this little teaser about four times and not knowing what happens is driving me nuts! Ichigo/Orihime is my favorite pairing, which seems to be a rarity around here, and they need to get more love. Continue damn it! ...Please?

Ok, I'll be honest, I don't like IchiHime pairings, but this is VERY WELL WRITTEN. It's very interesting, and has a sense of tangible beauty.

I hope you don't get any more reviewers who make unnecessarily belligerent comments about others like the second review did.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, despite this pairing!

Huh this is suppose to be a story? I am so confused very confused with this story.

Intriguing. I like that very much and would love to see how your fic goes. While reading the third part, I was thinking about Benihime but I doubt that I'm on the right track here.

I hope there won't be any more annoying reviewers bringing pairing wangst like that one with the 1st review.

Looking forward to your next installment.

oh very well written and I really like the vagueness in it-Grr I don't like this pairing (IchiHime)...but you're making it work by including this tidbit about Rukia, "She does not say I need him." At least it acknowledges her too.