Poor 625, to be robbed of something like that, to be permanently changed. I know this is a pre-Leroy story, and it made me think of what happened in Leroy and Stitch, when he sighed right before he lifted the servo unit over his head. I actually read the original story by Taylorwwjd first, they are both good, but I like how you developed the story. Great segways between the flash backs, it was one of the few good 625 fan-fics.

That was sad, but excellent. I must admit that I cried.

And so 625 ends his past story and leaves what was said and done for good, this was quiet and interesting read into his past. One of the most creative I have seen where he gets treated with dignity and seriousness than pointless goofiness, a sad ending for him but one handle very well so it never sounded sappy or weak. ^^"

Wow... vivid descriptions and surreal world detail. It took to another place. Very cool Dave. Keep writing and don't ever stop.

I really felt for 625 here. Depression can rob you of all your energy. It's a horrible thing.

Well I finally decided to review your story, and I must say, this one of those stories I read that makes me want to cry out loud. It is so sad, your story about how 625 got where he was today, it just seems so sad how it happened.

End transmission.

Absolutely incredible remake of my story. I like the way you went with the story. Very powerful.

Good job.

That's depressing... but very, very well written.

Wow...

That's the words the could escape from my mouth after reading this chapter.

Such a wonderful ending. It's stone-cold and serious. But that's what makes it so damn good. The personalities were excellent from the start and the new ones created from your 625 form. Although this is very angst related, I don't feel sorry for 625. He was vain and his lack of will lead to his own self-loathing/destruction. And probably the fact I'm one of the only 625 haters around. But, it was very impressive. A good sequel could be made from it, after events from the series.

This was a great story. It really recharged my ideas in this section.
/salute Watsonsword

Aha the art of subterfuge, I love it. That sneaky 625, using bribery instead of brute force, (I’ll bet ya Stitch would have done the latter though :D) but as you explained, that would have ruined everything, not that those spiders didn’t of course. Though, I can’t help but wonder the extent of the repercussions that this event will play in 625’s downfall, Hmm maybe it’s not just that particular event, maybe it’s also something else, 626 perhaps? Bah, only you know. So I suppose we’ll just have to wait until you update to find out.

PS. I like the Idea of giving 625 a background, this is the only one I’ve read so far but, seeing how you’re such a good author, it’s probably one of the best.

Wow.

I'm sorry. You've left me speechless.

That was one well played out stealth mission sequence you wrote Wattie, bribery is the oldest tactic but still a good one and I didn't put it past 625 to pull it by a long shot. Now I get the bad feeling that this is were everything goes down hill for the cute little sandwich maker, stupid creepy bugs. XP I'm glad your wrists don't hurt anymore and look foreward to hearing from you again. ^^

Woah... I've just read one chapter so far, but, wow. You've got a writing gift, that I must say. I don't know why I had previously avoided reading this story... anywho, I'm on to read the next chapters of the story.

~ecliptic

Woah! Everything was vaporized? I'm getting this queasy feeling.

This story is very dark and well-detailed. The only suggestion I can make to improve this chapter is to get to the flashback sooner. It is much more interesting than that TV show 625 was watching.

Anyway, keep writing! Please!

I knew spiders were evil. >=(