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| Priestess Kohana 2008-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseomg, that was so sweet! Fantastic job and keep up the amazing work!! ~K |
| Moonprincess92 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was an interesting tense to use, Ginny being the reader. I applaude you, i think it worked well. I liked it. Very sweet (Oh how i heart fluffy goodness) = D |
| angelraine 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abusehonestly, i dont understand this moment. who are teh people in question? i mean you could have at least described the people who are in the story. the guy is ron right? and is the other guy is harry? i dont really understand. is this fic yaoi or something? i'm really sorry but i really need to tell you that your fic is not that good. sorry... |
| Allison Carroll 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the description; how it only touches the surface, but you can imagine how it might have been. Definitely loved it! |
| ProfessorSpork 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff, I like the vaguely artsy feel it has. The use of second person was an interesting choice, but it works. |
| scrivania 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it. honestly. one of the best one shots ive read in a while. and i think the best of this particular scene. keep up ur writing!! |
| bruisedpapaya 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, possibly the sweetest one shot I've ever read.. ~Go see Harry Potter and the GOF, I am so the typing advertisement~ |
| hopelessromantic1234 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseoh my goodness! that was the sweetest story! i loved it! you are a very talented writer. i love romantic stories! that's why my s/n is hopelessromantic. that's because my mom and friends always call me hopeless because i totally believe in the romantic stuff and am always telling people about it. lol. i loved this story if i didnt say that earlier! |
| Jessica 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved how you made it feel like we, the readers, were Ginny. It felt so surreal. I think this is amazing... is it a one-shot... because if so, you should pursue doing this, except throughout their dating times in book six... once again, very deep and emotional... PERFECT! All my support, Jess |
| Lu 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...sweet...:) |
| CravingPassion 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw. it's really cute. Bit confusing at the beggining. I don't enjoy the "You..." as much as "She..." but it's still very nice. |