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| Sarafly 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing how people can have the same feelings about a scene and feel connected. When I saw this scene the other day during one of the re-runs, I wondered why Sara appeared so angry. You did a great job explaining it and I love that someone other than me,felt the same. Thanks. |
| MYBIGBLUEBOX 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is most excellent. keep writing!! |
| lantiscod 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuse“Love demands trust. I couldn’t love you if I wouldn’t trust you.”- I trust her! Totally! |
| lantiscod 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuse“I felt like betraying my best friend.”- He did! I'm thinking about it for a long time... and I've wrote the same words... |
| GreenCat70 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseit's a sweet story!! and I love that Sara said she didn't jealous Spork, oh sorry it's Sophis, because she didn't have to. Can't wait for new story. |
| geekluvinskater 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat onepiece Kristy... very well written and also very plausible... Good job! |
| spongebob 2005-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww that was cute! |
| cherry-kiss-red 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat... *melt* *sigh* Oh, that was such a great story. I want to read more... I know, I know, it's a one-shot story. Damn, I really liked it! -carrie- |
| cowgirl.at.heart 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutly loved last nights episode!! That cat-fight between sara and sophia in grissom's office was so cute, b/c sara was so jealouse. i wanted her to rip sophia apart lol, but unfortunatly that didnt happen. Great story! Really cute! Keep writing! |
| Cybrokat 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Kristy! This was a really cute story and since the ep just came last night I'm sure you had to write this quick but you might want to check it over. A few words dont have spaces and things like that. If you need a beta, feel free to holler. Other then that, loved it! |
| Eden Eyes 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT! I adored it hun, it ROCKED |
| csmit99 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abusei can totally see that this really happened after the episode I liked it:) |
| ToMyGrave 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it! So beautiful and really well-written. |
| Teryl79 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAW!! Honey, that's totally sweet. I love it! "I couldn’t love you if I wouldn’t trust you" that's one of the best sentences I've ever heard! *clap* |
| Grisslybear 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job, Kristy. Reminded me how much I would love to see how they would be with each other, comforting each other and such, if they are in a relationship. And love the fact that they know each other so well. |