VERY GOOD JOB. It almost seems like I am reading a very large novel and started in half way through and then went back and read the beginning. All of your stories could have been done as one humougous "book" and it would have flowed well and kept our interest, funny, that is why I'm catching up.

Great! I can't wait to read Part 3!

Loving these stories, :) glad to see them!

Two things worth noting: 1 - Spell checkers are cheap. Really, they're even free. :)
2 - Proof readers with a strong understanding of English grammar - you are writing so well, that it's a shock, like a splash of cold water in the face, when you use the wrong word. It disturbs the suspension of disbelief, and the stories are so good, that's just wrong! :(

The stories are FANTASTIC, keep writing! :)

I loved it! I seriously can't wait to read the next ones. Ive told yall that alot, but still lol.

One more chapter. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I also hope that the three kids are constant people in future stories.

Its easier to get through a door the first time, then it is to get back. No idea why I said that, but you know, it sounded wise. Even if it is comple gibberish lol. I am really enjoying this story. All of you are awesome writers.

This is getting good!

Poor Bianca... And Tom is funny! He is just as hormonal as every other guy I've ever met. (Me included lol.) I can't wait to finish this and read the sequels.

Poor demon... I hope they kill the smoke demon thingie. I just don't like something that can kill without being killed.

Kool. Can't wait to see how they get out of this mess lol.

Dang. Thats sucks. Both Cole and Wyatt are evil...

Wow, this is a really good story. I like this plot more than the plot in the first story.

Something always has to happen to Chris! I mean, seriously. Its always Chris that dies, its always Chris that gets kidnapped, its always Chris that gets sick, emotionally and pysically... Well, I can't wait to read this, it looks good.

Ok... First... as always... Thanks you very much!
@Boo26: Thanks for all the reviews, I'm so glad that you like this so far! Yeah, I agree, the last scene is moving, isn't it?? We love all those relationship secenes ;) Btw. Have fun in your holidays!

@ChrisPerryFan: First, Chrissy.W.x rold me that she skipped your review, since it was before her previous one, and then she could not review again, but she wants you to know that she's very grateful for your reviews, and glad that you like the story! ;) And for me, it is the same thing... Love your reviews. We hope that you enjoy part 3, whose first update is already online ;)

@Altaira: Yeah... That is our Chris! Glad that you liked that part. It was a weird part to write, wasn't it Chrissy ;) It took us some time. So I'm glad you liked it!

@Nathy10: Have a happy holidays! And thanks again for your reviews, as always ;) Yeah, the feelings parts are the ones we love the most, I guess ;)

@Chissy.W.x: Yeah... I noticed that, but I was logged on for three days and couldn't do anything to change that;)sorry!

Hey everyone...
Thanks for all the nice reviews to this story...

@Altaira: Thanks for your nice words...

@Boo26/Anna: I hope you have a nice holliday... You should have a look on our profile when you're back... *wink*

@Natty10: And another one who is on vacation... Hope you'll have fun too! And thanks for your words... We always try to "explain" the emotions of our characters... And we're happy that you like that...

@everyone: Now I'll go and upload the first chapter of our New story... And I'll also edit our profil a little... Chapter Two of Part Three will follow next week on friday... as always... *wink*

Thanks again to everyone!
Chrissy.W.x