Reviews for One Mississippi

Reviews For: One Mississippi - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

shadowsamurai83 2008-07-22 ch 5,	abuseThat was absolutely brilliant. You've got such a talent for writing these characters, you know. I think I'm going to be reading all your GCR stuff when I have the chance! :D
FoxyWombat 2007-05-19 ch 5,	abuseI'm just reading this now and it's great...wonderful stuff as usual!
Rissa 2006-09-02 ch 1, anon.	abusenominated this fanfic at {http/\community.
Review1234 2006-06-19 ch 5, anon.	abuseWow, I did not review this story, did I? whistles Well, I suppose there's really no point whatsoever in me running through the door to review, but for your pleasure, runs through review door and lands flat on face. Okay, okay, now to review. First off, wow. This, like all your other work, is amazing. This review has been long-coming, and it shouldn't be because you deserve instantaneous praise. And like all other reviews as well, I have no criticism for you. "'I sure am, baby – just like I said I’d be,' Catherine beams and glances intermittently across at Gil who smiles shyly to himself." When I read that, I could see Gil just sitting on that couch like a little schoolboy, just smiling away to himself and keeping that little secret kiss. It's a short line -- and I have a tendency to over-analyze groans -- but it's descriptive and very cute. The whole fanfiction, really, is very cute, but you have a fantastic bittersweet ending. They just lightly touch, lightly kiss, and when Catherine wants to speak more deeply about what they are not seeing, she never gets to do so. But still, the minimal contact fulfilled my CGR appetite, and the non-sappy ending was great. (And Confused Catherine plus Knowing Nick equals Pure Writing Genius.) sighs There’s so much on which I can praise you. Your characterization is amazing. Your dialog is original and witty -- jeez, the whole story is original and witty -- and your use of the word “Neutrogena” to make anagrams for your chapter titles is still unheard of from any other author, which makes you, Jade, very crafty as well. And one must love craftiness -- I suppose -- because it’s a rare trait in the world today. And Catherine taking care of Lindsay before tending to Gil? Hee! The woman’s maternal instinct rivals that of all the mothers in the world. And, yes, of course, like many parts in this story, I laughed fairly loudly and probably obnoxiously so, because, again, it just adds on to the greatness of your characterization. You hear that often from me, yes, but it’s true. You have another rare talented: the ability to keep characters in-character. Not even J.K. Rowling managed that with emo!Ihatetheworld!angry!Harry Potter, and the woman is a professional writer, with “is a professional writer” in italics. The world has gone insane. You need to have something of yours published; otherwise the apocalypse will come, and there will be no more fabulous fanfiction. Anyway, I’d like to apologize once more for delaying -- okay, almost putting off -- reviewing this CGR masterpiece and thank you greatly for writing it. Your work is enticing and intriguing and rivals that of some professionals. It is a joy to read and review your work, and I cannot wait for you to post another story. I know I say this to everyone, but here you are: Thank you once again for writing, and please keep doing so. :)
Queen of the Red Skittle 2006-01-20 ch 5,	abuseFunny with a twist of angst on Catherine's part about Lindsy - just perfect for fanfic like this. Original story, off the beaten path and one to bring chuckles. Very good fanfic. Loved it. QOTRS~*~
Lizzy Sidle 2006-01-19 ch 5,	abuse{laughs} I think I get it...she heard Catherine in the bathroom with Grissom. She thought they were both in there. When she told Nick he got other ideas. Even though Griss was alone... I GET IT. HAHAHAHA. Wonderfl story. :)
Nix707 2006-01-14 ch 5, anon.	abuseJeezus, that was brilliant as always. There was my GCR fix for the day! Keep it coming, it's great so far. Nix
coolcatz 2006-01-14 ch 5, anon.	abusethis was such a cute fic.
September 2006-01-14 ch 5, anon.	abuseLol! I guess I'll never be anything more than a pretty face :( See, that's why you do the thinking and I don't! I actually like that you didn't get them together in the end. Now I still have hope... Please keep on writing GCR, I love your stories!
cherished_crush 2006-01-13 ch 5, anon.	abuseanother great chapter can't wait for the next! i especially liked the ending.
Antigravity 2006-01-13 ch 5, anon.	abuseGood short story, I hope you make more. (Does Lindsay lock Warrick in the bathroom next time?
Krys33 2006-01-12 ch 5,	abuseTongue... hee hee. Anyway, nice, bittersweet ending. I really enjoyed it. And I enjoyed the Nick humor tossed in throughout. ^_^ Once again, my favorite line: "eventually the whole memory became like a fragile dream that they just couldn’t bring themselves to talk about just in case trying to get a stronger hold on it, shattered it forever." B-E-A-utiful. I loved it. I'm sort of sad, though, that it's over... I'll be left twiddling my thumbs waitng for another chapter of Wake the Hope. ^_^ I hope you write more soon! -Krystal
sanderswife 2006-01-12 ch 5,	abusei liked that chapter especialy when they kissed hope you update soon
Drusilla Braun 2006-01-12 ch 5,	abuseSorry I didn't review for the last chapter i was at my brother in laws when I read it and his computer wouldn't let me review. But i really love this story and I was glad to read it.
Haley104 2006-01-12 ch 5,	abuseNice chap. Can't wait for more. Not to be rude or anything but could you possibly try to update a bit more faster. I have to wait usually weeks for a new chapter and I would rather not wait for so long. I'm sure others feel the same. So if possible, could you post new chapter quicker. I hope I didn't sound rude requesting this. If I do I didn't intent to in any way. Please just take this into consideration. Anyways though, I'm lovin the story and I can't wait for more!

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