My favorite lines;
"You named it again, didn't you?"

And some crack in the first few chapters I forgot ^^; well Madame Fair is definitely making impressions is she not?

I know you wrote this sometime back and no idea if you are continuing. So the first chapter was cliche but nice. I loved it.

You seemed to have mixed up your 'than' and 'then' but let me go to the next chapter and see what the story is like.

humph only wussies numb their ears before getting their ears pierced ;P

^__^ I like how you write Sephiroth, he makes me giggle!

I'd have to say this is the best Clack fic I've ever read. I really hope you're not discontinuing it. :( It's such a wonderful storyline. . .

I read this last yeaR.if im correct. My friend had printed it out and passed it around our group of friends. Hahah imagine reading this with parents around and not ever reading a lemon before? Hehehe. Anyways..this is a good story. It's a lot better reading it a year later. :D So..you gotta update! Cause it's good.

(ehehe lemons :D)

Haha. keep up the work :D

i love this story its so cute!
i like how sephiroth acts especially when hes drunk
post more soon!
Cheers!

Sque~ Loving this so far! X3
It's funny too! ^_^
Heheh, Zack's mum seems a little violent! XD!
Poor Cloud though. Why would anyone pick on him? I'd glomp him to death. X]
Keep the great writing, Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Moon

This story has definitely captured my slumbering addiction of fanfics. The way you portray each of the characters, even if it is different than their original counterparts, is simply amazing. Your style of writing is very descriptive and captivating. Even though this story hasn't been updated in over two years, I really do hope someday you do post another chapter or two.

It's very good.

Oh, what a wonderful story! Though I'm not very comfortable about Cloud's cheerfulness...there's something behind it! x)

Yes, update soon and write MOAR.

I am cracking up at the thought of Sephiroth blushing because Zack just outed him. To, ah, Zack himself, but still.

Sephiroth: I. do. not. like. men.
Zack: Look, look, look, isn't this one cute? I call him Spike!
Cloud: OFF! Of me, that is. Do not want! STOP TOUCHING.
Zack: :D :D :D
Sephiroth: ... -_-; Goddamn, how old is he?

Yeah, there were my thoughts brought on by this. Anyway, glad to see several chapters are posted already. I go to read now. :D

I couldn't help but grin from ear to ear while reading this fic, Cloud is just too adorable for words, especially when he's so happy. It warms the very cockles of my heart~.

Did you give up on this story? I pray to the gods you didn't! It's too good! And you left it at a clift hanger... Well if you did give up... It was really good up to the end! ^^

OMG this is so cool read the whole thing , it's absolutly amazing !