Neville and Luna. Such a wonderful couple :)

That was simply beautiful.

cute

you should continue this..it would be great!i'm putting this in Story Alert!

Ah... *sniff sniff*

at first I wasn't sure about this fic because of the random patterns of thought, but then I realized that seems to be how people think anyways. You seem to have spent a lot of time thinking about this, it shows in the word use. Great job.

Great! Update ASAP!

I literally SQUEALED when i saw that you wrote a Neville/Luna... It was really good and in character, yet i would have really enjoyed some fluffy scenes and such

This story is sweet!

i love how u went in depth to neville's thoughts. wonderful piece of writing.

I really like it. I never thought of a Neville/Luna fic. Keep it up!

it's a really good story. keep it up.

Very nice((claps) a change from the usual, but nice.

sweet. You don't usually see stories with Neville in them. I like it a lot. Good job! :)