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Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseYay, all is well. Drowning Greg seemed a bit harsh, though.
Zaik of Wake
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseAwesomely, loved the sewer part.
DemonUntilDeath
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was such a great story! I liked how it was only one chapter, as well. I got the feeling that breaking that story into multiple chapters would have completely ruined it's flow. Great story, I loved it!
Dark Angel Kira
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseO_O! OMG! I was like, "no, they can't die" and then you saved them both at the end. Amazing job! had me going for a moment, then i remembered the beginning, and like, ha! ^_^

YOU ROCK!

-DAK-
surrealgreen
2007-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI think that you are hands down the best CSI fanficer I've read yet. I'm all about Greg action and angst, and Nick too--I like the focus you have on friendship (as opposed to pages and pages of smut or sara angst, like I've read in so many other fics) and I think your characterizations are right on the dot! I've been rereading your fics, and look forward to your next update (hint hint!).
kokomocalifornia
2007-03-06
ch 1,
abusegreat story!
kitsune
2006-10-16
ch 1, anon.
abuse^_^
Aevium
2006-08-09
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, I know you wrote this a while ago, but I just read it and it was absolutly incredible. You're so far my favourite author, Greg angst rules! But anyways this was so stunningly well written, you're an awesome writer! Keep up the GREAT work!!
Suspension
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThis story was amazing. You are definately talented, and I can't wait to read more CSI fanfiction from you. Keep up the great work, hun.
karmine
2006-02-16
ch 1,
abuseEXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! thats what this story is!
neeners
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseI would just like to say that I have read all your CSI stories, and now I don't want to read any others, because yours are the best.

Just thought that needed to be said ;)
Pog Mahon
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseanother excellent Greg-angst piece! YAY! i seriously love Nick's last line, "Next time we find something down a storm drain, we make Warrick go get it," i was laughing, which is a good thing. anyhoo, great story!
shacky20
2005-12-02
ch 1,
abuseOH BOY, an early Christmas present for me. And why didn't I get my author alert damnit! Oh well, more to read now. Yeahness, you know I love all your stories, every one of them, so this is a real treat. I know your stories aren't slash, but have you considered putting your stories up at the site I recently took over (yes I'm pimping for your stuff). I would love to have your stories there because they are such great Nick/Greg stories, and the angst, oh the angst. OK, off to print, and I'll be emailing you later I'm sure telling you have wonderful this it.
Guardian6
2005-11-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh wow, you said I made your week? Well, let me say that right back at you! I know I'm a little slow in reviewing, but I like to go back and read a story (especially one as stunning and superb as this) time and again - and of course, little things like real life get in the way!
But now I've made it, I have to say just how incredible this story was. And a one-shot, too! As much as I adore your multi-chapter stories (and even the evil cliffhangers), this was a real treat - Christmas and birthdays all come early!
And the plot was brilliantly constructed, more and more gradually revealed, until we learn the truth of what happened to Greg. Yes, it did seem like Nick was being persecuted afterwards - and the procedures and his being hauled over the coals might have felt like petty office politics, but the bombshell at the end...
Woah, I really wasn't expecting that!I think I was just about as shocked and appalled as Nick! Wow that was one of the most fantastic endings I've ever read. I genuinely didn't see it coming, but it was utterly perfect.
As ever, the characterisations were spot on, the dialogue nothing short of perfect and you captured what is, to me, the very essence of the show. No, they're not perfect; yes, they can make mistakes; and every now and then, they're reminded of how deadly those mistakes can potentially be.
Great, great story! In fact, I'm starting to run out of superlatives! Great doesn't even come close to capturing how much I loved this story.
Thanks for the acknowledgement, by the way. I really appreciated that. It kind of made my day (as if you hadn't already done that just by posting this fic!) and I just want you to know that I genuinely mean everything that I write in these reviews.
Thanks again for another superb story.
Kindest regards,
Helen
thebondgirl
2005-11-26
ch 1,
abuseheyhey! WOW!! I LOVED IT!! i mean, i haven't had a chance to read any of your fanfics before (i'm gonna now tho!!) so i wouldn't know just how in-depth you're talking, but this one was awesome, so expect to see 'thebondgirl' signed on a few more reviews for your stories! keep on writing:):)
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