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| a fan 2008-06-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseLike the story, but there were to many flashback. Other then that it's good |
| karen147145 2006-05-16 ch 10,  | abuseWOw omg i never expected that wow. i hope theres maybe a sequal maybe :) But seriously wow i really enjoyed this story and i'm glad theres a happy ending |
| Loretta the Contessa 2006-05-15 ch 10, anon. | abuseHave enjoyed reading this story |
| Falconwolf3 2006-05-15 ch 10, | abuseGood job! Loved that Lexa taped Li, that was great! |
| Feral's Revenge 2006-05-15 ch 10, | abuseum... hey... OK I'M SO SORRY THAT I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN THE LONGEST TIME! BUT YOU KNOW, YOU HAVEN'T TRIED EITHER! BUT I'M SORRY! i'VE BEEN TRYING INCREDIBLY HARD TO BE ABLE TO PASS SCHOOL with little success, BUT MY TIME TO TALK TO YOU HAS BEEN INCREDIBLY LIMITED! I HAVE BEEN READING THIS STORYSINCE IT WAS POST, BUT i COULD NEVERGET AROUND TO REVIEWING! I HAD TO PRINT THESE OFF IN THE MORNING, SO I COULD READ THEM AS I LEFT. Whew, now that that is over... I totally miss you! that was so good too. I really think you have finally outdone yourself. Bravo! Bravo! Anyways, hope you finish the other one soon. AND you MUST update Jesse and Lexa. I'll be waiting for an update. Maybe I'll even email you, who knows. Keep writing! Feral's Revenge |
| karen147145 2006-05-08 ch 9, | abuseWOW i mean really wow. i cant wait to read more of this story. i really really cant wait to read the next chapter but i guess i have to. so i hope to read more soon. |
| Falconwolf3 2006-05-08 ch 9, | abuseVery good job, very glad to see you updated this one finally :) |
| Hannah554 2006-04-19 ch 8, | abuseI only just found this but i really love it, it had me completely gripped. |
| Falconwolf3 2006-02-17 ch 8, | abuseGreat job! For 90% of the story I hated Jesse for cheating on Lexa, then it all came out that Li was Psionic, great job, never saw it coming! |
| VampirePrincess86 2006-02-17 ch 8, | abuseIts good but i dont think lexa would use a knife. lol. i think she would jest blast her. |
| Tashfan 2006-01-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseLove it!! Cant wait for more!! Update soon and keep up the good work!! |
| Falconwolf3 2006-01-19 ch 7, | abuseTell me he's going to stop!! Don't like Madeline!! Update soon please! Good chapter, except for the ending,lol |
| Lady Notorious 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseStill saying the same thing as last time. If you don't keep Lexa and Jesse together I'll break something. |
| Falconwolf3 2005-12-30 ch 6, | abuseGood job, the whole First Nation thing was a bit silly though. I get the whole organization thing, but something about First Nation seems fake,lol, might be Madeline. |
| karen147145 2005-12-13 ch 5, | abuseonce again i LOVED it. and the cliff hanger WHY a cliff hanger (*:(starts to cry:(*) but still i loved it and the cliff hanger. |