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| chris hallett 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abusescrooge is weird |
| Isabelita Rox 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusetht was a very original idea. cool! |
| bookbelle 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abusethis is excellent! I really like how scrooge struggles and is torn between the doubting "old scrooge" and "ebenezer", who wants so much to hope-it's so realistic and true to human nature. and the ending is so well done, when his nephew (love) calls him out of his loneliness and away from the power of "old scrooge." i really enjoyed reading it. |
| Anna B. the Greek 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseAww! Internal conflicts and a happy ending. Nice! See ya, AnnaBtG. |
| The Fink 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea and very nicely carried out. It might be interesting to develope this further and extend it - but as it is, it's a very well done short story. Thank you. |