 Renee6061 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Very nice! |
 chris hallett 2007-12-18 . chapter 1scrooge is weird |
 Isabelita Rox 2007-12-08 . chapter 1tht was a very original idea. cool! |
 bookbelle 2006-03-02 . chapter 1this is excellent! I really like how scrooge struggles and is torn between the doubting "old scrooge" and "ebenezer", who wants so much to hope-it's so realistic and true to human nature. and the ending is so well done, when his nephew (love) calls him out of his loneliness and away from the power of "old scrooge." i really enjoyed reading it. |
 Anna B. the Greek 2005-11-19 . chapter 1Aww! Internal conflicts and a happy ending. Nice!
See ya,
AnnaBtG. |
 The Fink 2005-11-19 . chapter 1Interesting idea and very nicely carried out. It might be interesting to develope this further and extend it - but as it is, it's a very well done short story.
Thank you. |