Very nice!

scrooge is weird

tht was a very original idea. cool!

this is excellent! I really like how scrooge struggles and is torn between the doubting "old scrooge" and "ebenezer", who wants so much to hope-it's so realistic and true to human nature. and the ending is so well done, when his nephew (love) calls him out of his loneliness and away from the power of "old scrooge." i really enjoyed reading it.

Aww! Internal conflicts and a happy ending. Nice!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Interesting idea and very nicely carried out. It might be interesting to develope this further and extend it - but as it is, it's a very well done short story.

Thank you.