Reviews for The Official Fanfiction University of Akilectopia

Reviews For: The Official Fanfiction University of Akilectopia

Yemi Hikari 2007-01-10 ch 1,	abuseLol - For those who don't know, the rule says this exactly. Enteries not allowed: 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. Some people will argue that asking for character ideas. which is what this author is doing is interactive. But that would only be so if you guys had control over the characters that she is using. Your just helping her create them. And in my opinon, that is a big diffrence. ... In the meantime, I'm going to make fun of the MAry Sue! 1. Her spelling is attrocious. (SP) I don't care what she says. Even if she did write a good story, spelling, grammer and typos take away from it. 2. No offence, but I thought Lan was already melting his heart through kindness. Laikas too. (I am not sure if that is the JP or EG name) 3. There is no begining to her story, just him instantly seeing her. 4. The pallidin sword is NOT a chip! 5. The name isn't exotic. It is made up of a bunch of linguistics that makes it sound sappy. 6. Romatic garbage. Blehh! 7. Princess? Yeah right! 8. He knew her but couldn't rember! Blehh! 9. The lack of knowledge of the Japanese laungauge is astounding! 10. Navi and human love. Not happening. 11. The fact she thinks that her fanfic will be put into Rockman.exe 12. The fact that if Chaud was real, SHE would be able to make him fall in love like that. 13. Her mind is so in the gutter! 14. Her lack of knowledge of any character other then the ones she deems favorable. 15. Meijin san! Hah hah. If she paid any attention to the show, she would have known that he HATES that! 16. she believes that her plotline is original. 17. OCness of actual characters. 18. Her colors Wheat Blond is real, but sunflowers are ussually yellow, and wheat blond isn't a very nice coloring of blond either. (Probabbly my opinion there.) 19. The hating of a character because she wants him. 20. The fact that she thinks she diserves him and only she does. 21. She bashed characters. (Dekaoh is one thing though, as even the regular author will unitentionally bash him as it is obvious he isn't that bright. Lan sometimes too.) 22. The fact that she doesn't wish to read the fine print. Wow, that's a LOT of Mary Sue! Good job!
Bobbaloo 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abuse...hmm...odd...yeah
Elsie Grandewing 2006-03-05 ch 1,	abuseokay...that was weird...but it's nice in a way!^^
golden-eyedwolf842 2006-01-01 ch 1,	abuseCan't wait to read the next chapter. Anyways, great job with writing this. Please update soon! Keep up the good work! :P
someone100001 2005-11-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseHee...I can't wait to see how this "Leannala" will handle the entire school thing. I pity Laika and Enzan, poor fellas. Well, update soon!
Bonta 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseTo Daidairo: Well! Keep up the good work girl! You've outdone yourself here. To all those who send their applications through reviews: SERIOUSLY. Can't you frigging people READ?! She says " Please do not write your applications in reviews". And you dumbaes don't give a fricking damn about this! Do you want her fanfic to be taken off so badly, people? THIS IS NOT A INTERACTIVE FANFIC FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! As a good friend of Daidairo, seeing her insanely makes me ** as well. I'll try to be nice here. PLEASE do not send applications via reviews.Daidairo doesn't like it.
Rose Kitsune.EXE 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseI apologize about my earlier review, I wrote management about it. ^^() I'm really sorry. Didn't mean to get your story deleted or anything. >>()
MagnetLord 2005-11-19 ch 1,	abuset3h b35t str0y ev4r! lolz!1! But more seriously brilliant idea! I couldn't stop laughing, and that's something. There isn't really anything I can really criticize, other than there aren't more chapters up yet. Hope you update soon, and good luck with getting '100 reviews a chapter'. P.S: You might also like a poem called: Bob writes a FanFiction, it's in my Favourites if you want to read it.
Ri2 2005-11-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseAn ambitious project, one which I hope meets success! Because, er, not to disparage you or anything, but...well, the majority of other OFU fics I've seen have, well, never been finished. This one seems to be off to a good start, though. Although... Is getting this sort of participation from the readers against site rules? I forget. You should probably make sure.
Rose Kitsune.EXE 2005-11-19 ch 1,	abuseOh boy... XD This gives me painful memories of my first Mary Sue... XD At least I used spell check, and deleted my story when I realized there was no hope, no escape, FROM THE EVIL THAT IS SUE! XD I would like to put my character in. XD PH33R and obey! "Official Fanfiction University of Akilectopia Enrolment form Name: Rose Serrisa Pen name: Rose Kitsune.EXE Age: 13 Gender (circle one): Female Height: 5' 4" Weight: 103 lb. Race (circle one): Other (please specify) Fox Demon Hair colour: Mud Brown Eye colour: Grey Have you watched the Rockman EXE Anime? If yes, which ones have you watched? (circle all that apply) EXE 1 / EXE 2 / Axess (half of it, anyway) Have you played the Rockman EXE games? No Favourite set of names (circle one): Japanese Favourite Lust Object: Enzan Reason: I suppose because he can be cute, an because he looks so cute in that Axcess episode where they show him as a kid. Second Favourite Lust Object: Blues Reason: He always supports Enzan, amd he never takes off that * helmet. >> Favourite Hate Object: Brightman Reason: I heard "check it out!" ONe to many times, and it was only one episode! >< Second Favourite Hate Object: Jasmine Reason: She looks creepier than Meiru. >> Did you understand the previous two questions? Yes Do you write yaoi/yuri/shounen-ai/shoujo-ai/slash? Yes Favourite pairing (if any): Enzan/Blues Reason: Because Blues always supported Enzan, and come on, you had to have seen SOMETHING suggestive during Axcess. Least Favourite pairing (if any): Enzan/Yaito Reason: Enzan is too old for her, and she's annoying. Do you bash characters? No Have you ever written a Mary Sue/Gary Stu? Yes Do you even know what a Mary Sue/Gary Stu is? Yes Do you use spell check/grammar check? Yes Favourite genre (circle all that apply): Action / Adventure / Angst / Comedy / Drama / Horror / Romance Have you ever been to any other OFUs? No Why do you write Rockman EXE fanfics? Because I like the characters, even the ones I like to hate (CoughBrightmancough). And because I firmly believe in Enzan/Blues as my one true calling. XD" Just make me rather random and insane, and you have teh Rose. XD Can't wait for more! ~Rosune-chan

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