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Sonofdin0956 2/11/12 . chapter 10
You did great on this chapter.I swear I laughed so hard I was hallucinating.Seriously,I saw gannondorf eating a cinnamon muffin.
Crystal114 9/9/10 . chapter 4
lol loved the muffin song
LostInHyrule 12/15/08 . chapter 10
A bit of a disappointment, actually. The "cleverness" that makes this story so great was lacking, and the "Event-event-description-event-event-description" style of writing, without much variation, makes it a little slow to read through.

Story is still one of my favorites of all time- but I begin to wish for the glory days of James the Muffin to return. There were practically no muffin references in the entire chapter. :(

A final note: Although plots are always a good thing to have, nobody is reading this story to be entertained by plots. We're all here for your wit- give us more of that! You've already proven you can. :)

Good luck in your continued writing!

LostInHyrule
Calamitynexus 12/15/08 . chapter 2
OMG!

Mega Squee dude!

I loved the musical interlude. That was great. That song is so adaptable. And Zim! He made a guest appearance! And itsold school Batman! You managed to combine all my favorite elements into one zany chapter! Thats was amazing!
BalthierFlare 12/15/08 . chapter 10
Yey an update! This made my day! :D

I love this fic! It is funny, and it's amazing, too! I hope you can get inspired again for this because I'd love to read more, but if you don't then there's nothing I can do. DX

Anyway, there are some really hilarious lines here, and reading this fic always puts me in a great mood. XD

Great job!

Bal-chan
PrincessStarberry 12/14/08 . chapter 3
Ok, maybe it's because the current time is 1:39 am, but this made me laugh so hard my face now hurts!
DynturaDJ 12/14/08 . chapter 10
Yay! Come on, write like the wind! This is the funniest thing I have ever read.
elodrie 6/20/08 . chapter 9
Funny & cute how it shocked Link - also liked the Ireland bits.
Typing Typhoon 3/29/08 . chapter 9
This is one of the few stories on the site that truly make me laugh. Ingenious, update soon.
monkeybait 3/7/08 . chapter 7
I remember reading this story a long time ago. It's the greatest story ever. Keep up the amazing work. XD
Krystal Tiger's Den 2/4/08 . chapter 9
...um...i think you k-killed my sanity...

I shall have to chase you with...um...lamps and sickles! Yes!

As an aside, I also toast to Zelda and Ganondorf, Cheers!
Numdenu 1/29/08 . chapter 9
Who cares if you've raped canon? It's FUN.
MILFORS98675309 1/18/08 . chapter 9
Oh God, I know that feeling. You're out with a friend and people assume you're together. Update soon, this makes me laugh. And good luck getting into college. I know the pain, I'm a college bound senior too. :D
Owneybaloney 1/18/08 . chapter 9
I love how Ganondorf order A keg of beer that was really freaking funny love this story keep making chapters.
LostInHyrule 1/18/08 . chapter 9
I realize that you need a plot, but this chapter sort of disappointed me. There were a few good lines - the opening one comes to mind - but you could have done better.

Still, since you set up a plot, I'm looking forward to a follow up on that, and soon!

LostInHyrule
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