BRILLIANT!

You really brought out Nancy's character. She no longer felt like a character on a page. awesome!

this was beautiful and gut-wrenching and sparse and simple and i loved it.

I just wanted to say that you are totally awesome for writing this

this is really good. ive read it acouple of times now.

that's some very fine writing! and I think that both the tone and characterisation is loyal to the original, so that's really excellent. This is one of my favourite pairings, and I'm really happy that you've done such a wonderful job of depicting it! Keep writing!

That's so damn sad. I loved it.

Beautiful, lyrical prose. Such a poignant story, written in such a wonderful fashion that really brought tears to my eyes. You captured the circumstances perfectly, and it's such a pleasure to behold. Congratulations on a well-crafted story. A fantastic vignette.

wow. nice one.

I came searching for this fic after I watched the movie, and I totally love this. It's a nice idea, and a good wrap-up to the movie.

Oh, WOW. I loved it. This was an amazing story - captured their relationship in a heartbeat. It's so sad that Hartigan died..

So beautiful! I really like Nancy, and you captured her feelings perfectly. Kudos!

this is an AMAZING story beyond belief! You captured their relationship perfectly!

hope you write more sin city stories... cuz they're AWESOME ;D

aw... That was so cute, cute and sad at the same time. I loved it. Hartigan shouldn't have died. :( lol, good job! :)

This was so sweet and I loved how you ended it. Very touching.

Aw. It's still so sad that Hartigan died. Aw.