nice but sad story.

well written and easy to read.

good job.

At first when I started to read this I thought it was going to turn out bad. I HATE Aoshima with a vengeance. Read the ending of my Can Love Really Transcend Death? fanfic when I get it posted and you will see how much I hate him... NO one should be allowed to have Belldandy as a Girlfriend except for Keiichi. Very Good fanfic, good ending, even though Keiichi died, Bell could still be with him.

I just got into OMG and this was pretty sad.

That was really good...O.O I love sad stories!

woooow. i never liked Aoshima much... but this just makes me feel sorry for him. for some reason, i think that if Keichii were to really die, Aoshima _would_ be like that, ne? anyways, good fic. sorta sad, though... G.S.

wow, that was sad. But you told the story really well, keep it up!

Whoa. That... well, that's a decisive ending, at that. This only serves to reinforce our dislike for Aoshima, you know. Very well executed.

I think a sequel is in order.. as this harsh lesson is exactly what will start the boy growing up.. and maybe finding another.. as some here have felt or had nightmares of, ja ne, Ucchan? *smiling enigmatically*

eep. i can't think of anything else to say. eep.

I loved it!

Very interesting. I liked it :)

This I would like to see more of... _ 6/10