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Reviews For: My feelings For A Maggot

Girl-who-sings-the-blues
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseYes... just "A Thank You" Abel...
He's so antisocial! > _ < ;
Dragon Chyld
2006-01-04
ch 8, anon.
abuseWell, looks like they both have something to say... Let's see if things work out in the next chapter :)
keeki
2005-12-07
ch 7,
abuseI like this story it's different, short but sweet. Keep up the good work!
Cliff's Girl
2005-12-06
ch 7, anon.
abuseOh, this gets better and better. I love the sneeze scene. Sounds like the two have a case of my bad luck.

Continue...wouldn't be nice to leave the two alone in that cave - and it's snowing. I know you're not that mean ;)
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-28
ch 7,
abuseI really enjoy this. It's also great when I want to jump on but don't have a lot of time - story of my life sometimes ^^;

ACHO! - I have to laugh and cringe at the same time. I was laughing while saying "Oh, no, not that - haha" I love the way they are both thinking the same thing.

Nice way you toggled back and forth between the cave and Airyglyph, added a bit of suspence.
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-23
ch 5,
abuseCute...real cute. I like the thoughts and Sophia thinking she was dead and wondering if she would go to heaven.

I wonder if anyone will try to find them, if they are going to be out all night.
chibi usagi
2005-11-23
ch 5, anon.
abuseAww...this is cute. Just be sure not to rush the romance. Take it slow to give them time for their feelings to develop. ^^
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-23
ch 4,
abuseOh no, not dead...But she can't be or this would be an Albel story and not a SophiaXAlbel, huh? Well, on to the next chapter.
Cliff's Girl
2005-11-22
ch 4, anon.
abuseNo...No...Not dead!

"But, I...I...just..." (Just couldn't kill a weak monster? Don't like the idea of killing? Or is it something else?)

With all these Alphia stories, I'm getting to read a variety. I love it.
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-20
ch 3,
abuseSophia's singing puts Albel at ease - NICE!

Though short, I'm still interested on how it goes. Next it's time to train.

P.S. yeah, took me a while to figure out the system here. I turned my anon blocker off after reading some reviews for other stories. Then I found out you can delete them.
Cliff's Girl
2005-11-20
ch 3, anon.
abuseYes! When I read the reviews I was hoping you would turn off the anon review blocker thing (what ever it is - I don't have an account).

I agree with Dragon Chyld, short and sweet but interesting. I would really like to see Albel slap his forehead, I found that part humorous.

Keep going, I'm becoming a fan of various couples.
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-19
ch 2,
abuseYeah, sometimes I find myself in the mood for something shorter also. I go up and down on ready to read long ones then short ones.

Well, short or not I like it.
Dragon Chyld
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuseShort and sweet. Hope this is the prologue for more.

Oh, and I don't know if this is intentional or not, but you have anon. reviews blocked. I went to review and forgot I wasn't logged on. I know some like to keep it on, but you can delete anon. reviews. I know, I had to delete one from a story of mine.

Continue :)
Shizuka Usagi
2005-11-19
ch 1,
abuseNot bad. It could be longer though. Yes! Another addition for my AlbelxSophia c2. (If anybody even sees that thing...) Keep writing.
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