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| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseYes... just "A Thank You" Abel... He's so antisocial! > _ < ; |
| Dragon Chyld 2006-01-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseWell, looks like they both have something to say... Let's see if things work out in the next chapter :) |
| keeki 2005-12-07 ch 7, | abuseI like this story it's different, short but sweet. Keep up the good work! |
| Cliff's Girl 2005-12-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh, this gets better and better. I love the sneeze scene. Sounds like the two have a case of my bad luck. Continue...wouldn't be nice to leave the two alone in that cave - and it's snowing. I know you're not that mean ;) |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-28 ch 7, | abuseI really enjoy this. It's also great when I want to jump on but don't have a lot of time - story of my life sometimes ^^; ACHO! - I have to laugh and cringe at the same time. I was laughing while saying "Oh, no, not that - haha" I love the way they are both thinking the same thing. Nice way you toggled back and forth between the cave and Airyglyph, added a bit of suspence. |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-23 ch 5, | abuseCute...real cute. I like the thoughts and Sophia thinking she was dead and wondering if she would go to heaven. I wonder if anyone will try to find them, if they are going to be out all night. |
| chibi usagi 2005-11-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseAww...this is cute. Just be sure not to rush the romance. Take it slow to give them time for their feelings to develop. ^^ |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-23 ch 4, | abuseOh no, not dead...But she can't be or this would be an Albel story and not a SophiaXAlbel, huh? Well, on to the next chapter. |
| Cliff's Girl 2005-11-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseNo...No...Not dead! "But, I...I...just..." (Just couldn't kill a weak monster? Don't like the idea of killing? Or is it something else?) With all these Alphia stories, I'm getting to read a variety. I love it. |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-20 ch 3, | abuseSophia's singing puts Albel at ease - NICE! Though short, I'm still interested on how it goes. Next it's time to train. P.S. yeah, took me a while to figure out the system here. I turned my anon blocker off after reading some reviews for other stories. Then I found out you can delete them. |
| Cliff's Girl 2005-11-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseYes! When I read the reviews I was hoping you would turn off the anon review blocker thing (what ever it is - I don't have an account). I agree with Dragon Chyld, short and sweet but interesting. I would really like to see Albel slap his forehead, I found that part humorous. Keep going, I'm becoming a fan of various couples. |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-19 ch 2, | abuseYeah, sometimes I find myself in the mood for something shorter also. I go up and down on ready to read long ones then short ones. Well, short or not I like it. |
| Dragon Chyld 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet. Hope this is the prologue for more. Oh, and I don't know if this is intentional or not, but you have anon. reviews blocked. I went to review and forgot I wasn't logged on. I know some like to keep it on, but you can delete anon. reviews. I know, I had to delete one from a story of mine. Continue :) |
| Shizuka Usagi 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. It could be longer though. Yes! Another addition for my AlbelxSophia c2. (If anybody even sees that thing...) Keep writing. |