I really like this, but is it supposed to be a one-shot? If so, I really think you should add more to it anyway. It was just way too short and so it didn't express as much as it could have. But very angsty and emotionally driven. Good job!

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loved the line: “Homegirl wouldn’t see a romantic relationship with you, baby boo, if she walked into it and then it hit her a couple o’ times around the face with a mallet.” So OC! lol!

aw angst, don't you love it!!

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Oh. That's sad. Fantastic, yes, but sad and exactly what would happen between the two of them. Maxie isn't very honest about her feelings, is she?

How true and how sad for Alec, loved this piece.

Oh god, I feel so honoured! Great take on Alec's pov btw, and it would be great with a sequel so plz write one!

its okes :)

that was really good, liked it from alecs point of view!

I love all your Max/Alec stories. They're amazing, and your writing style is brilliant. I hope you write more and more.

This story was so sweet, but too bad Alec couldn't get his happy ending. Sequel maybe?

Keep up the good work!