I must fave this, for not only does the subject make my heart leap, but the beautiful way it is written does also. Lovely.

"Jacob is William's soul mate." (melts) AW!

^^ I always save the xheartmehorrid fanfiction alerts for later - whenever I'm in the mood for a fabulously written fanfic. You're so reliable. Amazing, really...

O_O
I think I'm in love with you. This was written in such a flowing, poetic that really proves your worth as an author. Not only have you created a beautiful fic - you did so in a very short way. Many readers don't quite understand how important and hard this is, but going on and on endlessly does not help a story. Yours was so flowing and yet contained that perfection is the only word I have for you.
*Bows*
Continue your writing, because you will always have a fan base.
~
BalrogsBreath a.k.a. Oro

that's beautiful!

I really WANT to leave a long and detailed review right now, but I'm too blown away to think of anything to say. This was beautiful, touching, and practically (if not, totally) perfect! Loved it a LOT.

Bravo!! Loved it!

"Jacob had caught his heart in his hands and stained them with the deep, dark ink of what never should be."

Are you a poet? ...that was nothing but beautiful T_T

Your story was simply gorgeous, I just finished watching the movie (all of ten minutes ago) and I have to admit, this (your story) is exactly how I'd picture them to be together.
Any chance of another chapter? ^_-

wow, this def. snaps a fangirl back to reality. It strips down the romaticized grimcest fics and makes it really seem like it could have happened. Very nicely done, if a bit harsh.
-Aspen

M ... lovely. There needs to be another chapter. But, who am I to talk, eh? Beautiffully written, short, and sweet. Very nahce.

Wow.Just wow. That was beautifull!

Wow. That was just lovely. Brilliant. I love how the beans just pop up everywhere. Very nice. The last line was just perfect.

This story is very passionate. Beautifly writen. plz update.

Cuteness! You should definitely write more.