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| speedmonkey 2006-01-08 ch 8,  | abuseSorry to hear you were in the hospital. I hope that you are feeling better. Great update. I can't wait to read your new story. But don't rush take your time and get well soon! |
| JACarvello 2005-12-17 ch 7, | abuseAw, poor Cheryl. Hope she is okay! Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next! |
| speedmonkey 2005-12-15 ch 7, | abuseWhoa what a great chapter. But i'm a little confused. Did Calleigh shoot cheryl or stuart? |
| speedmonkey 2005-12-11 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter. Please update soon. |
| lovegregsanders 2005-12-09 ch 6, | abuseIt's a very good story. I love this chapter...but when are we going to see Delko again. good speedle/cheryl thing keep it up :P |
| speedmonkey 2005-12-04 ch 5, | abuseWhoa, wait a minute the hummer exploded...um...Horatio's going to be mad! lol. just joking. Great chapter. Please update soon. |
| Nexus of Dark World 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseNice story! keep it up! My fav 4ever! |
| speedmonkey 2005-12-01 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. He kissed her yay! Update soon please. |
| Llarian 2005-11-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseOkay... Cheryl is a Mary Sue, make no mistake about that. BUT: Your writing is excellent, and you just about nailed the characters, especially Horatio! The way you write them, I can hear them speak. Nice going! ;-) P.S: Love the banter - especially the bikini jokes. |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-22 ch 3, | abuseI love this story! I love Cheryl ! I love the fact that she is letting her hair down some and relaxing a bit. COuld you explain why she hates needles so much? I mean the way she reacts , she had to have had a bad experience with them. I can't wait to read the next chapters and the rest of the series! great job! |
| randomwriting 2005-11-22 ch 3, | abuseThanks for clearing up the RTA. Still reading & enjoying. Quite a visual...picturing Speed in a bikini... Have fun in Texas. Hope you come back w/ lots of ideas. |
| speedmonkey 2005-11-22 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter. I'm glad Eric's ok. I loved the little jokes about the bikini. Funny stuff. Please update soon. |
| speedfanatic05 2005-11-22 ch 2, | abuseI love how cheryl thinks and she is a take charge type of person... this was a great chapter and I hope to read more! |
| fleetyfillyhpchic 2005-11-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseBrilliant!Absolutely brilliant! I must congratulate you my friend; this third installment to the series is astounding! Good job and keep going! |
| randomwriting 2005-11-22 ch 2, | abuseI'm enjoying your series. But I must ask: what does RTA stand for? I look forward to reading more. |