heyy! i love it. the style of writing is wonderful. the descriptions are great too. i think that it would interesting roylust. i like it though definately keep it up.XD

LustxRoy is very awesome. We need a lot more of it.

Damn you! This is too amazing! You are a fricking. Literary. Genius.


I beg you to update soon!

Ja ne!

-Kaze

This really good...I love it. What language is that?

wow this is really really good please update soon!

Very good! I can't wait for u to update! XD well written and an interesting story!

Please please update soon!

Thanks :)

Great story! I just found it, and it's definatley going into my favorites! I can't wait till you update!

MOE! Attack of the morgasm! I couldn't help but review since I had extra time. I can't wait for you to send more to me! You are my inspirtation, and right now I'm in a major writers block...so blah.

Talk later, but remember you are a literary genius.

XD

Still very interesting... I don't know xhat else I could say, really... are you sure the age of retiremetn is so early for graded militaries ?

XD

Very nice, good job.

this story is startin off pretty well ill definately read more

It's still good, with an interesting story, and interesting ideas in character development too.