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   LittleValerious 9/25/12 . chapter 5Nice! |
| HBK43v3r 8/7/12 . chapter 8 This story has a stereotypical setting with stereotypical characters with a stereotypical plot line and for that. I love it so much! CONTINUE! |
| Garnet Literature 5/1/12 . chapter 7 This story is quite interesting. I absolutely love how much detail you put in towards each individual character. Only a true writer dedicated to their work could pull off something like that; and might I add, flawlessly. Though, the detail of the characters at times kind of takes away from the whole of what's going on. At times I found myself kind of confused with everything that is occurring at this point. I hope you take my advice to heart and (maybe) tone it down on how much effort you put forth for each character and rather focus on what's going on. Most of them are going to end up being killed and eaten, am I right? Lol. Anyways, I now notice how long it has been since your last update and I hope you are still planning on working on it. This story has a lot of potential. *Subscribed* |
| horror101 11/13/10 . chapter 4 poor Rain! :( i hate it when people treat other people with disrespect because they can! pls let something good happen 2 her! |
| veryfinechardonnay 7/19/10 . chapter 5 Continue, please! |
| musicandlyrics511 7/8/10 . chapter 5 this chapter waas a bit confusing. It might just be me though. I thought the other 4 chapters were amazing! I like the gay pairing the most! Definitely on my fav list! Please Update! :) |
| lordfury16 7/28/07 . chapter 1 good story |
| Samopoly 1/27/07 . chapter 4 Write more! Update soon! |
| redplanetes 11/12/06 . chapter 4 Oh no! A Creeper drive-by! Thanks for heeding the call. Keep it up! |
| GuesssWho 10/14/06 . chapter 3 23 of them? really? LOL ;) |
| Serpent's Messenger 7/10/06 . chapter 2 One word.. "AWESOME! I love the details and description. This would be a pefect Jeeper Creepers 3! I'm expecting lots of death scenes with tons of pain and blood! Whe...! Love it! |
| Lord Stingray 6/2/06 . chapter 2 This sounds like it could be a very interesting story. All you have to do now is keep on writing more chapters to this story and I'll be sure to read them. |
| Juicy Fruit Girl 2/18/06 . chapter 2 This story is really good. It actually feels like I'm watching a Jeepers Creepers movie. Update kay? |
| Sigourney 12/17/05 . chapter 1 This story has some good potential. It's been almost a month since you updated, so I really do hope that you continue. I like what I've read so far. |
| Ami Quinton26 11/20/05 . chapter 1 Hm, this looks like it could be quite good! I certainly hope you continue. |
