Even though I'm not much of an Albel/Nel shipper, I thought this was really cute, and I was happy to see them get together at the end, and I liked that Albel was realistically Albel-ish instead of getting all lovey-dovey from the start. You also seemed to improve a lot at writing over the course of this fic. A sequel would be great! :D I'm wondering if Albel would have as easy a time adjusting to living in Aquaria as he thinks...

I give a rank of S on the ending which also puts a good ending to this story.
If you can, it would be good if you can do a sequel on this story.
If you do put up a sequel, would it be put up anytime soon?
Congratulations on finishing your first story and thanks for writing a good story for viewers like us.

Aw! Wat a nice ending! Woot go Alnel!

tht was an awesome last chapter =] thts sweet albel decided to live in aquios..i personally prefer tht to airygligh neday
overall nice story!!
hope you write some more...ur really good XD

wow tht was really good! i kant wait to read the ending =]

Yay! Nice chap. and very cute. Go alnel! Keep up the good work! Gosh i hate Vox in the begining of the game!

Right on! Go kill that Vox once in for all! Muahahahahah! Great chap!

Great story

nice

Yay! You finally update! Yes! Lets see what happend next chap.! Keep up the good work!

Ah...the final showdown...I can feel my spine tingling...er...well not exactly, but still very exciting nevertheless...but that's a pretty mean cliffhanger there...XD so..keep up the update..

cant wait for the next chapter!

Oh cute ^_^

albel is very determined

Albel is sweet when he is focused on Nel heh. good chappy