 sdfsafdfasdfasdfasdf 6/11/11 . chapter 1Amazing little ficlet. I can't wait to read more! |
 LeighAnnWallace 6/10/11 . chapter 1Good one! Damn, these Winchester boys are stubborn! |
 Rosawyn 6/4/11 . chapter 1Awe, poor Sam. You've done a great job making this believable and keeping them in character. :D |
 PVersusNP 11/5/10 . chapter 1Love this! I felt like some minor Sam whumpage, and this was perfect. Thanks! |
 ziggy.uk 9/4/09 . chapter 1Okay, so it is nearly 4 years since you wrote this fic and I have read and enjoyed it several times so I should really comment on it!
Great little fic, awesome injured Sam, was right there in the bathroom with them as I read. Loved how Sam insisted no hospital despite Dean's words until he suddenly violently vomited and pitched forward towards the bathroom floor. And perfect from Dean "I knew you'd see things my way,"
Loved it. |
 amyblair 9/1/08 . chapter 1A half hour?
This is really, really good. You so bring the reader right into the bathroom with the boys. The smells, the feelings, the dizziness. All there.
Nice job. |
 Rachelly 8/24/07 . chapter 1Chipping away at your great stories! This one was perfect...limp, concussed/Sam with a side of angsty Dean. I love the details you give in your writing! Loved Dean's worried concern and how, though he wanted to get Sam to the hospital, he waited until his little bro agreed. He could have easily overrode him, but he didn't. Love that he respects Sam enough to work with him. Loved the brotherly banter..."hard head" "thrown against a wall, again". Well done! Reading on! |
 IheartSam7 7/6/07 . chapter 1I JUST LOVED THAT! TOO SHORT THOUGH- YOU NEED TO WRITE CHAPTERS AND CHAPTERS AND CHAPTERS COS YOURE SO DANG GOOD! XO |
 Dark-flames 6/21/07 . chapter 1yes...it's sad but I'm addicted to the sam-in-treatment thing now... |
 bubblesquirt 6/8/07 . chapter 1When his vision cleared, Dean was bent over before him, his face mere inches from Sam's. Sam jerked and tried to back away.
"Quit moving," Dean snapped, reaching out and grasping Sam's jaw with calloused fingers. The other hand pressed a thick wad of white gauze to Sam's temple.
Sam yielded to his brother's firm grip, despite the pain that blossomed in his temple. "Stop," he whimpered, closing his eyes once more. "Hurts." - :( Sam.
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Aw, this was awesome. More more more! |
 Child of a Pineapple 3/21/07 . chapter 1Ohmyholygosh...
So...have I told you that I love you?
Hurt/comfort is my life.
Great job! |
 KatieLB 8/27/06 . chapter 1Ok i almost need a second chapter to this oneshot... i know defeats the purpose but you wrote it so well i wasnt ready for it to end... good job |
 Constance Eilonwy 7/4/06 . chapter 1Oh, poor Sam. Both the brothers' reactions were very believable in this. Interesting moment when Sam's vertigo stills because he's focusing on Dean's necklace. |
 KateCyrus 5/5/06 . chapter 1This is the second time I'm reading this, it realy pulls you in. Very true to the characters. Wish it continued, but it's a nice scene as is. good work! |
 Kaewi 12/30/05 . chapter 1Aww, too bad this is so short. I would've liked to have seen the next part. But it was definitely a great read! Being a bully isn't a bad thing ;) |