LIKEOMGITSFLUFFANDEDANDROYARESOMENTTOBEANDIMFREAKINGOWT!1!!

Okay, enough of that. THis story is totally AWESOME! but you use Ed's name alot. It gets kinda repetitive and you can make it 10x (

very sweet, i loved it!

That was so good! Ed was a bit out of character, but I loved it!

Good story. I really like it.

i would just like to say that i'm crying right now and my eyes hurt. this was so beautiful and sad and happy all at the same time. absoluty breath-taking. i'm seriously crying.

*choked cry* Oh, it's lovely and horrifying! *throw arms around author and cries* Thank you for sharing this. When Ed falls off the bed and you are describing him as cold, sweaty and sticky - just thinking that clammy would be a good word.

~ Miss.

So sad, but sweet. Lovely one-shot.

very cute

Kawaii! ^^

...I need a Roy in my house T-T

I ought to go make one out of clay...Yes, I will make one out of clay!

I'm good at making stuff out of clay. Yesterday I made clay **! ^o^ Because I am a Big ** ^^

Oh so cute!

oh this was so good. so so so good. do you do requsts? if so plz do one like this except a little longer and with roy having the nightmare...

i loved this story so so so much. it was excellent. I feed on it.

Aww! how very sweet.

such a beautiful story!

This was so cute! I really liked it. Please write more stories? Please? -looks at you with big puppy dog eyes-

I don't really read up on the male to male stories but this one is, I think, the best one I've read yet!! Keep up the good writting!!^.^