so tonks began telling Harry al she knew about his parents and Sirius
Very good story!

so should be uppercased
'al' should be 'all'
also there should be a period after Sirius


in the end Harry wowed
uppercase 'in' and 'wowed' changed to 'vowed'


to himself to get a pensive to se some of these things maybe Remus would donate some thoughts.
change 'se' to 'see'

When they at last were at the door Harry tried to open it, it was locked. “Damn it” He said “back a few paces will you” he said then he took a chicken bone from last nights supper that he had cleaned and etched some runes on and hanged it on the door, then his hand started to glow red for a short while, when the glow stopped, he touched the bone and ran to his friends.

'Hanged' should be 'hung'

Very good story!!

Your story is very good, nice plot and all that.

I did notice this chapter needs some cleaning up, you may want to have it betaed or something.


Harry just raised an eyebrow and said
-should have a comma after said

I must say I am not surprised that you did almost fail on the stealth test at the auror academy,
-should say "suprised that you almost failed on"

because i could have heard you a mile off but...”
the 'I' should be capitilized

then he was grabbed and hold nose to nose with an angry metamorphmagus
'hold' should be 'held'

“Y... you...you heard me... but how?” she asked and Harry answered calmly
Period at the end

nice name

good story please update soon

This is awsome! :D

This is so col! I can't wait for the next chapter

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

Not bad, not bad at all.

good story so far and update soon.

r u going to update soon it hass been years

i would prefer hp/nt soz if ive already said that

HP/NT

i love it add somemore of harry being sarcastic to dumbledummy

good story.. I like it.. Well done.. :)