Beautifully Written is what describes this best.

The story flowed well and kept me interested the entire way through. I loved the general plot, and the language you used put the story across very well, I could see it happening as I read it.

I love the little parts of the song you included, I've heard it myself and it fits this Fic perfectly, down to the bone. I loved the flashback, it was heartbreaking but beautifully so, and I loved the part when she came out of the flashback and Severus was there, waiting.

And finally, the very end was so bittersweet, I couldn’t help but read it over and over.
"-with a fresh rose in my hand and a peaceful expression on my face."

I loved it so much I've added it, and I hope to see more lovely work from you in the future.

Broken Memories x

thats so sad, i liked that, well written, but sad

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

omg...
it's a really good oneshot but it's sad. i guess not everything is happy in this world and i should try to understand sadness but i still like happy endings better. great job.

Wow! what a twist! I couldn't really see the Hermione from the books, but I DO like the flashback; you made me cry! I like the ending best, and you can certainly write more HG-SS stuff.. Keep writing!

omg that was so good. Made me cry omg so sad *sniff* love it