continue it plz _

You do realize that the mummy actually takes place im the 19th century and I am not sure that your story fits in that era but I really do like your story and you should continue. I want to read more about this. Please Update

Oh! Very interesting! I like how you wrote it. Please put up another chapter.

Good story. Being a guy I wouldn't know what that is like so it's hard for me to feel sorry for her. I would, however, love to hurt Carla and Christy for what they did to her. Keep up the good work.

if you get rid of it i will hunt you down and force feed you hair. keep going, its great!

i like it alot, i think you should add more

Hiya!

Nice story! I feel like punching C&C myself. Evy is a late starter! Poor girl! Keep at it. And give yourself more credit, your a good writer, plus, if you give yourself credit you get confidence which is good to a writer.

Just remember, When someone says something it should be the next line down. It's proper layout, n it makes your chapter look longer! Lol!

Keep at it, lets hope poor Evy cheers up!

Ash

Ps-I have a story about them in school, though its quite different, Humorous! So that should be up soon, its called Brydon High!