Reviews for Four's A Charm: Change Happens

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RJF 2006-10-09 ch 40,	abuseI like the touch about Phae going completely crazy, as if she can sense that Andy is in peril, along with Glenn. And how it's Prue's natural instinct to try and rationalise her fears away. Nice opening to the final chapter! I love how you've done Pam's anger towards Dane, and how you added in the fact that he's been groomed for his trial, as the pictures that you see on the news when these people are first arrested for such a constrast to how they actually look like in court. Lol. I'm also loving how you've had Persia be on the verge of a panic attack at the very sight of Dane. Another thing that was also done well in this scene was the exchange of the actual trial. All those morning people's court shows make an impact? Lol. I loved the scene with Pandora sensing that Andy was trying to contact her, and the fact that Shelia didn't even know what the hell was going on. Lol, that kinda reminded me of Darryl, which I guess makes sense. :P I also like the way that the girls have a pre-programed thing in their cells to contact one another when there's a demon attack. I guess it makes sense after all these years! Hmm... You've got me intrigued with this demonic pregnancy, although I think I already know who it is. And I like the idea of a midwife demon resembling an insect, as insects are often though as inferior to humans, so I guess that mentality kind of fits with the demon world. Ha! Prue and Paige's plan to get into the OR was genius and so perfectly Charmed! Especially with the transmogrification going wrong thanks to Paige's infancy when it comes to her latest power! And wow, looks like the birth of the Source is certainly a monumentous and extravagent occasion, what with all the light and the fire. Too bad nearly everyone present gets completely and utterly decimated in its wake. Although I'm betting that midwife demon is glad that Scorpia got what she deserved for nearly killing her in a labour-induced rage. A lot of stuff is going on in this finale! What with Persia's trial, Andy and Glenn's accident, and of course, the birth of a new Source. And uh oh, Pearl going behind her family's back and using Brandon instead? sigh Why don't she learn that that never goes well? I love how you've got everyone rallying around Persia here as well. Lmao! Oh dear, just what has Paige got herself into this time? She probably should have tried to pick a less vital member of the surgical team to imitate. Not the lead surgeon. Although something calls me her telekinetic orbing will come in handly here. Its always struck me as the kind of power that would be great in surgery. I totally love how you've done the little thing with Pam not being able to keep a lockdown on her cryokinetic powers! Hey, at least she didn't tap in to her advanced TK and send everyone in the rom flying in different directions. And argh! What a mean cliffhanger for that scene! I'm gonna need to rush through the next one to find out what the verdict is now! That's totally true, what Pearl said. About that, with her family, it's always more likely to be something rather than nothing. And oh! A little foreshadowing of the nice kind with the Breal-ness (My own attempt at a shipper name. Yes, I know it's crap. Shut up.) Will they maybe get together in the next story? Wee! GUILTY! Oh yeah! And I totally love (I know I've overused that word a lot in this review, but it's a long chapter with many bits that that word applies to) how Persia's got a little gang in the form of Pam and Tyler. And how Persia doesn't need to be looking over her shoulder anymore. GUILTY! HOORAY! Oh, nice twist, and a lucky break, with the only doctor who saw being the brother of a witch. She's lucky no one else saw, and that this doctor is now so willing to help and let Prue and Paige in to see Andy and Glenn without any sneaking. Although for some reason, I feel this Dr. Cheng may play a part in events to come. Am I right? Again, nice use of employing Phoebe's powers to further the plot. Something that the show didn't do AT ALL in the latter half of its run... sigh Nice description with Glenn hooked up to all the machines. It kinda reminded me of when Piper and Phoebe find Prue in hospital after she crashed her car into a pole in "Dream Sorcerer" and how they stayed by her side and helped her fight him off. And again, great description when Pearl was fighting the urge to heal him. I can just imagine her hands floating over him as she repressed the urge to activate her power. The internal healing was a good idea too, as they can just put it down to Glenn being "lucky" instead of something that they need to disect. Lol. Heh. That's my Pam. Protective of her friends, extremely dangerous when she wants to be, and just a little unhinged. Lol. But hey, that kinda describes every Halliwell, don't you think? Good scene. And now, onto the final scene. And I loved the lines about fingers with Glenn and Andy. And their little race to the front door. This ending makes a nice change from the last story's finale, where everyone was on the brink of death. But this has been one of your darker stories, and I hope you continue this trend, because I have to admit, I think it's produced some of your finest writing to date. Awesome finale, awesome story. Post the next story soon!
bun 2006-10-07 ch 40,	abusegreat ending. i'm glad dane got what he deserved. can't wait for the sequel
charmedbaby11 2006-10-06 ch 40,	abusePlease write more soon
unique-deflection 2006-10-05 ch 40,	abuseHey i can't believe it's here I'll call it an early b-day present for friday lol anyway just to elt you know that ive finally got my own computer back so i'll sort out that movie i made for you and get it send to you lol now on with the review btw just too let you know im writing this as i read it other wise ill 4get loads of stuff lol so if it doenst make sense sorry :( Oh i loved how you got the tension going with Phae crying. and Alternate Pam judging Dane that was class and personally id like to tell him wear to go shove his smart dress suit and it ain't anywhere nice cause what he did to Persia angry glare (not at you btw lol) Wow when you decribed Dane getting up i felt my heart quicken it felt like i was feeling a tiny amount of what Persia was feeling let me tell you WAY TO CONVEY EMOTION lol Omg that slimy toad i say kill him personally but thts aonly cause Persia is my fave chracter lol plus what he did was unmentionable. I like how you make him seem like a water polo player completly up his own ** that fits him perfectly Smack Dane's lawyer i say he's so totally bogus. Omg Andy in surgery and not telling Pandora the full message omg recipe for disaster much! Wow Pandora's powers advanced much further than ithought she's so quiet that you'd never notice i like that about her. Okay you are conveying way too much emotion through these things and your making them really visual it's like im having an empathic preonition which could happen to a mortal personally but thats a different subject lol Omg pregnant demoness maybe an opposite being to Phae maybe hm i'll ponder other that unless you tell us lol. LMFAO at Prue and Paige in the bathroom it's like they've become as close as Piper and Prue were if not more close i love that about this story we never got the chance to see that in the show. hehe extra large rolling luggage lol Omg what a biatch of a cockroah like minion altough one less demon couldnt be worse lol and omg its the sources heir isnt it cause you said he? Aw Pearl and Brandon are so cute together they are so meant to be!And omg when they said they'd reached a verdict i swear to good my heart stopped lol Yes that prick exscuse the lanuguage is getting what he deserves and omg persia called Cole dad omg that was so sad but in a good way lol Wow the kids powers are really powerful i mean i knew they would be but not at that age wow lol. Omg this is a totally wide throw but when you said about Dr Chengs sister lighting candles with her fingers and casting protection spells and cricles it totally reminded me of the witch in the pilot could that be her? Wow Pam in major mood i love it personally i thought she was going to kill him lol but that might look a bit suscipous plus get him let off in a way Oh wow i loved the ending where al lthe kids ran down screaming and "the mysterious finger" lol and when Phoebe Leo and Cole all apaeared lol and Andy closing the manor doors so sweet. Well certainly was an eventful finale cant wait for the next story update very soon lol :D:D:D
damien455 2006-10-05 ch 40,	abuseone word describes both this story and chapter: PHENOMENAL!
peanut2lb 2006-10-05 ch 40,	abuseHa! You kept Peanut waiting with baited breath until the very end to see what happen with her precious Andy and Glenn. Sigh...the trait of a good writer, I know...:) I kept thinking that one of them was going to die. My mind kept racing back when when Pandora wished Andy was alive again and the Elders said that if he ever died again that this time would be for real. Glad to see that did not happen. I have to say I absolutely loved the end when Andy closed the door to the manor with his crutch! Bravo to that one! Andy using Pandora to tell Prue that he and Glenn had been in the accident was pretty clever too. Again you are commended for the banter between Andy and Glenn. The relationship you have created between them is spectacular!! I really enjoy seeing the human side of things. Also glad to see that you didn't have Leo just give them a quick fix. Pandora, she's just such a cutie. Nice to see that you included Sheila too. Phoebe: I kind of found myself seeing red over her comment that Prue was being selfish. IMHO Prue probably didn't want them to worry until she knew all of the facts. She wouldn't Phoebe to worry about anything except Persia. Poor Paige having to masquerade as doctor just to find her husband and then being made by a man who had a witch for a sister. It was nice to see how Tyler and Pam were there for Persia. Cole's emotions during the trial were awesome. It's good see that he'd really taken to being Persia's "Dad" Glad to see that Dane was found guilty. And the Cockroach Minion, I love the idea of that!! An heir however has me a little concerned...is this the rising of the next Source perhaps? The child of the Source and Scorpia should make for a formidal foe at any rate. Nice to see a glimp of Pearl and Brandon. I like how you keep presenting them as the next "supercouple". In fact, even though they are young, I like them better than Persia and Tyler. Nothing agaisnt Persia and Tyler, it just that Brandon and Pearl seem more real to me. Bravo on another end to a marvelous series. Peanut anxiously awaits for the next chapter.
VampirePrincess86 2006-10-04 ch 40,	abuseah! lol its over! cute story! so cute. i love how paiges powers have advanced. lol. cant wait til the next one is up.
unique-deflection 2006-09-07 ch 39,	abuseOMG I'm so sorry i really had thought i'd reviwed this chapter but obviously i haven't which i feel totally ashamed of now :( Anyway this unfortunatly will only be a short review as I'm using a library computer and this bitchy library woman is giving me the evils as I was meant to be of the computer about half an hour ago lol. I loved the aylum scene and how Piper and Emma worked together. Oh god my minds gone blank on what happended now :S Now i remember lol i loved the bridge scene where Emma took on all the pain i loved that lol for some strange reason lol the ending to this chapter where Maxwell and Michelle have a son together loved how you called him Mason so all of their names began with an M that was excellent well i thought so lol. His powers seem really powerful like a mix between Michelle's and Maxwell's powers which i think is an excellent touch. Can't wait to see what you d owith that if anything lol. I liked how you managed to be true to the way Ross writes his characters as what you find with crossovers some people tend to destroy the chracters but you didn't luckily lol not that i expected you to do that lol. Anyway the library womans coming over so unfortunatly for me but luckily for you you get away with having a short review from me lol. Can't wait for the finale update soon :D
moonfirefairy 2006-09-01 ch 39,	abuseReally good chapter!Update soon!Will there be a sequel to this fic?
kezzy014 2006-08-29 ch 39,	abuseheya i love you story, charmed is my fav tv programme ever and i thik if they did a episode like that it will be amazng and the rates will be sky high, plz rite more im relli looking forward to reading more thansk for the great read love kez
peanut2lb 2006-08-18 ch 39,	abuseWow, what a long chapter, this was nice added bonus!! Yippee!! Mortal Men Peril! I have to say this was my favorite part for personal reasons. I can't wait to hear Prue and Paige's reactions. Poor Andy, after working so hard not to rear-end the van and having take on Glenn's attitude. The toothpick lines were classic. nice job with the humor there!! And Prue!! I love the reference to her being an angel! It was nice to see my favorite Charmed One on a solo rescue. The use of her astral projection was perfect. Great tie into Murphy's Luck with the baby being named Maggie. I want to see more scenes like this!! :) Nice touch with Pamela's feelings towards Prue too btw. Piper: Lol to her seemingly disgust/impatience over being at the mental hospital. I almost laughed out loud at the term "un-michelled" Nice touch with the Vietnam Vet latching on to Piper and Emma scanning his mind. Emma taking on the world's pain and using her powers against Piper was classic!! I must say Michelle defintely sounds like a force to be reconked with. Technopathy? This is an interesting power. Very creative!! I was almost sorry to see her leave. I loved how she tapped into Emma's powers and tried to torture with all of the world's pain. The scene with Persia screaming reminded me a lot of Carrie. Go Cole! I really liked how you brought out the hero side of him here. Phoebe and Paige were classic. Nice touch with the hands up scene. It reminded me a lot of that eppy where Paige wanted to become a cop for a nano-minute. Can't remember the title... I do have to say I found the ending with Peria heading off to bed a little odd, nothing wrong with it. It just seemed like there were some other loose ends that needed to be tied up...mainly Andy and Glenn. LOL Brilliant chapter. Well thought out! Great use of Ross' characters too btw. Quick question? Do you have a facisnation with blood? LOL. Anyway, since you always end your stories at chapter 40, can't wait for the finale!!
RJF 2006-08-16 ch 39,	abuseAs I've already told you, I loved this chapter to bits. The darkness and chaos just called out to me. Lol. I love this asylum bit, mainly because I'm particularly found of a "Supernatural" episode that takes place in a haunted asylum. I can just see Piper reacting like that to a man behind her, lol. And the description of his lips! HA! And interesting back story to the patient. I'm guessing Emma just freed him of Michelle and not of the illness that landed him in there in the first place. Isn't psychokinesis useful? :P Ha, Semi-Charmed Life. Shout out to Third Eye Blind perhaps? I would comment on the rest of the scene, if you hadn't STUNNED me with Glenn and Andy getting involved in the pile up! Will they be saved?! Bwah! Paige was so in character in this scene. I can just imagine a little cocky sneer when she says "The good guys," Lol. Not to mention she actually ORBS a gun, which she seemed to be incapable of doing in the show ("Hyde School Reunion" and "Mr. & Mrs. Witch" anyone?). Phoebe's powers must be going into overdrive with all this activity. Perhaps she'll recieve a power advancement for her troubles? Maybe the power to summon a premonition at will? Now, this is also a scene I'm fond of. Not only is Cole saving innocents, but he's getting thanked too. Even though the witch (I'm guessing she was a witch if she knew of the COs.) saw him use his demonic powers, she saw past that and realised that he had saved her life. Good scene, and nice bit of character development too. :) Another scene I loved! Not only did you use Prue's power of astral projection masterfully, but you had her saving innocents with minimal use of her powers (If you exclude the APing. Lol.)I was expecting Prue to phase the door off its hinges or something, but then again, TK is the all purpose power. And nice shout out to "Murphy's Luck" with the little girl being called Maggy! And as I read on, I see this whole scene was a shout out to that episode! What with Prue saving that guy from suicide, and with him calling him an angel. I wonder if any of those specialised darklighters were hanging around... Haha, Pam's great to have in a crisis, and nice little bit of continuity from my story with having her use her TK to get through the lock. I'm glad you've had Pam restrain herself this time around with Prue. Lol. Although I'm wondering why Emma isn't answering the calls. Wow, that was some power Emma just displayed. But it looks like Michelle can take her on with just the same amount of strength. What is it about psionics that makes them more powerful than the rest of the mutant classes? Lol. Nice addition with Michelle becoming robotic once again like she did in MX. Ha, you know, in all the confusion, I totally forgot that all the damage to your world and that it's these foreigners fault that it's ended up like that. Lol. My characters apologise to your characters. Lol. And Persia was certainly risking herself, especially since Emma could have orbed from falling. I'm glad Pearl's gonna be safe, now that Emma's dragging Michelle back to my world. I feel like I should say "Sorry for the mess!" Lol. Ha, nice way to bring Maxwell into it. And if you kinda think about it, it fits with the job I just discussed with you. Lol. And I'm gald you mentioned that Michelle has a little bit of emotion left in her, as it would make the next scene a little confusing. And I wish I could say that was Emma's first kill, but as we both know, it wasn't. Ah! Who would have thought a goodbye through a computer could be so heartwrenching! It was a good way to utilize Michelle's main power. Although I am appauled that Michelle left her son for so long so go and terrorise another world. Lol. And you don't need to worry, Mason is in safe writing hands! Ah, I'm glad we were able to get a friendship between Persia and pamela going. I think she's going to be needing her support in the chapter to come if she has to face Dane once again. One of my favourite chapters from the story, if not the series. I'm now eagerly awaiting the finale! So... UPDATE SOON!
charmedfanatic1010 2006-08-16 ch 29,	abuseohh, looks like somebody's got a new power
Ed 2006-08-16 ch 39, anon.	abuseThese two chapters were amazing. It had everything from drama to comedy to action and supense. I love when you mention things from the show like when Piper didn't want to go to the mental hospital because of what happened to her in Brain drain and that woman calling Prue a angel which reminded Prue of Maggie from Murphty's Luck. I loved the scene where Pam muttered that she almost got killed by a eleven year-old. I thought the scene with Andy and Glenn was so funny especially the part with the toothpick. I coundn't stop laughing when Andy warned Glenn not to make the same nosies that Pheobe makes when she uses a toothpick. I loved how you described the scene on the golden gate bridge it made it more real. I loved the ending so Maxwell is Mason's father that sounds very interesting. Update soon.
damien455 2006-08-16 ch 39,	abusegreat chapter! cant wiat for more! update soon!!

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