Very good. Loved it :-)

Aww...that's sad. I love how you broguth up the sharignan making the rates of how Itachi percieves things weird...never thought of that before. Wonderful job .

I just love your subtlety. There's a detached sort of tone present in your style, and yet it possesses so much substance. It adds such a fluid grace to your story. You have such a beautiful writing style!

Your dialogue was perfectly fine, I had no trouble following it. But yes, pronouns can be evil.

Man, I just love your stories! Especially this one with Itachi (I LOVE THAT EVIL BASTARD) and Kisame (I LOVE FISH).

Great work! :cookies:

That "fish man" thing threw me off, especially after the horrors of the KakaIru fandom, I kinda have a habit of wincing when fic usings tags like "fox boy", "dolphin teacher", "the scarecrow", outside of humour.

This was really good... Very eeriely written. My only qualms are that some wordings were awkward, Kisame seemed a little off, and it began to get repititive, but overall, it was still a very well written piece, something original, and it fit Itachi perfectly...

*adds to C2*