A very good story so far. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that takes away from the experience as a whole. Keep up the good work.

looks interesting... ill keep reading.

The next chapter till 2008?! man you kept me waiting longer for this chapter and you will keep me waiting longer again? no fair ;_;

Anyhow this sure was a pretty interesting chapter but I think I need to re-read the whole fic, I mean I kinda got confused about why the others want to play pranks on Davis and/or Veemon, is really odd so I guess I need to read the other chapters again, I only remember that fight TK and Davis had.

Man this is good, keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter

lol leave it to Floramon to expect more of Veemon, but well she still doesn't gets to know him well, she needs time ^_^

glad to see you updated, I was missing this :)

Catherine and Davis, and Floramon and Veemon? now that's a nice combination if you ask me, that sure would be good to see, I'm glad you updated again, I was missing this story :)

I'm not liking where this story is going...
...good beginning though.

Hey! Glad you updated, now that news sure were shocking for Kari.

By the way happy birthday! :)

talking about long absences lol

Anyhow, the things are getting really better now, is good to see Takeru and Daisuke now as friends for a change :)

At last you updated again! ^_^

poor Kari and Gatomon they sure will miss their loved ones :(

Wonder what Davis will realize?

Oh for the record if you want the original names of TK and Matt's parents their mom is Natsuko and their dad is Hiroaki :)

At last you updated! I'm so happy my friend ^^

hehe Patamon dressing up for a date sounds cute ^^

But why when everything started to go fine TK and Matt's parents decide to move out to Australia? poor TK he doesn't have much look to have all he wants ne?

Anyhow keep up the good work, I want see Kari's reaction to this :)

Err... nevermind about what I asked you for this fic in the pm of put PataGato, I didn't saw you changed the summary lol

I read this one time ago is getting good

i cant wait for the next chappie!
=DD

wow i like it...
the only thing i didnt like was Sora going out with Joe...
very creative though lol i would have thought of them together...
=D

Well, there are lots of grammar inconsistancies that make the reader confusing, not just little punctuation mistakes, but problems with tense, but I'm not the greatest at grammar either. I thought the beginning with couples was unnecesary, that could have been left as an epilogue. A great amount of your story was dialogue, what would be nice is if you place actions in between, some description of the scenery or something.