So sad!

Indeed very short, but you are going to write a sequel right? I would also like to know what happened before, how White came to the conclusion he loved Max. Since you are writing several stories at the moment I'm just gonna have to add you to my update notification list.

I think you can get this idea to a whole story. I've got an idea that White fell in love with an X5,then he
betrayed the Familiars who' re hunting him and X5s don't trust him either,etc.

Aw...she died. Why?Why?No

Good starting though

Rela