Reviews for Revelation Kiss

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Vanilla Slash 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abusei'm proud of ya! :! good oneshot!
TheNicestThing 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abuseaw... :( i've never read a Harry Cedric before, and yet i love it. it's so sad and beautiful. sad cuz we know cedric's gonna die..i LOVED the bit about the 'ghost of a kiss'.. beautiful cuz of your writing! I'm gonna cry! sobs
allieweasley 2006-11-26 ch 1,	abuseMessage 1: I totally agree that Movie 4 was the slashiest movie. Message 2: Don't worry, I'll be a good citizen. I think you'll rather like my reviews. Review: Extremely, extremely sad! I almost began crying, really, and I'm thankful that no one's bothering me right now. It should give me some more time to spend on I liked how you reviewed all the aspects of the year, and how Harry felt whenever he was doing something Cedric-related. Very dramatic and tragic, and I don't know why I still read stories like these, but I've gotten addicted. Probably because many slash stories are rather angsty. And your descriptions about how Harry reacted every time Cedric would smile, blush, etc. The kiss near the end was oh so fluffy and sweet, it made me smile. And I agree that there should have been more instead of a kiss before Cedric died! You've gotten me rather mad at Voldemort and Wormtail, but nothing a good dark!fic can't cure. The only problem is that you have a few spelling errors, but that's fine. Everyone makes mistakes. n-n
DyingInnocence 2006-03-28 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story.
Ducky 2006-02-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm trying something new here. Instead of just criticizing your other post of this story, or just this one, I'll simultaneously criticize and/or mock you in two places at once! There wasn't too much wrong (besides sentence structure and such, but this is Art and not an essay, so I have to ignore most of that), but what was wrong was more like little things. Like saying "way" twice in the same sentence, sort of things. AND THEY MADE IT SOUND WORSE. I'm not even going to bother with character names. It's been too long since I read one of Rowling's books to be certain about any of the names, so I'll just take your word for it. Glaring errors aside, I do like this story. It's not so different in style from "Whispered Conversations" or your second Drabble Box entry, in that it sort of summarizes a lot of writing in a fairly small space. Even if Claire hates the lack of dialogue, I love it (less proofreading of speech! w00t!). P.S.: I still hate your -ie. Glory to Times New Roman!!
LJSkywalker 2006-01-11 ch 1,	abusethat was so adorable and sweet! So sad all at the same time! Fantastic job! two thumbs up! That movie was so slashy i thought there was a misprint in the script! lol
Tatsuya 2005-12-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is wonderfully written, very sad but none the less it is wonderful! Also about the movie...oh my god I know, such a slash happy movie it is crazy, I too have developed many new pairings.
sesshomaruhasafluffytail 2005-12-16 ch 1,	abuseI'm going to... :'(( :(( :(( :(( wah wah wah wah
CarminaBurana1 2005-12-03 ch 1,	abuseFantastic! So beautiful and so sad...I almost forgot that there really wasn't a kiss...if only they'd put one in the movie, eh? Those last paragraphs, about Harry crying and kissing Cedric are wonderful. Really sad, but wonderful all the same. Great fic.
sounds-like-fun 2005-12-01 ch 1,	abuseNow I definitely AM a huge fan of Cedric/Harry... i loved it!
shaylee 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw how swet lol...it really was...sighs...if only that really did happen lol
wild wolf free17 2005-11-26 ch 1,	abuseWonderful!
Goldengel 2005-11-24 ch 1,	abuseBeautifull. A big mistake was just reading this and listening to Nirvana at the same time. It made me so sad. But very, very well written. To your A/N: the movie was so slashy. But I had to cry when Harry brought Cedric's body back and cried and everything. And then his father. I sat in cinema crying. Ever since I've watched GoF on Saturday, I haven't read one Harry/Draco. Just Cedric/Harry. Such a great pairing. Such a great story. (Such a cheesy ending to a comment. ^^)
Pink Shocks 2005-11-23 ch 1,	abuseOkay. Slashy much? God, even my friend who doesn't like, know about these wonderfully wonderful slashy fanfics was like "Ohkay... so was Cedric flirting with Harry or...?" Yeah. Oh, right. Good story. Very sad. Funny at some parts too. I lovelovelove your writing. But I already told you that on Fiction Press. I'm Serialcode A over there, mmhmm. Yes. Well anyway. Very good. Keep it up. PS. Don't you think that line when Cedric told Harry about the bathroom was, ah, so slashy it hurt? The whole theatre was cracking up. Teehee.
Hisui 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon.	abuse>_< You made me cry... Great story, though.

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