wow! This is really good! Excellent job

I love it! Great job!

Poem! ^_^ Pretty poem too. It should be a song.

This is simply beautiful. Somebody should turn it into a song, then maybe screw it up by turning it into a dance remix or something. But anyway, I like this a lot. It's pretty.

Gods, that's lovely!

! (good exclamation marks)
I love this, especially the 'murders the mind' bit. Gave me shivers. =) *gives cookie*