I like how you gave Mokuba some recognition. It's a very sweet story!

I like it. Pretty good. Although, you might want to mix in words like "boy" or "young duelist" instead of repeatedly using "preteen." Also, the Rare Hunter gave up WAY too easily. Unless he had something up his sleeve, no Rare Hunter would surrender so quickly. Oh! But now I sound like I don't like your story! And I do! Oops! ^_^' Well, seeya!!

Not really digging the fact that my Seto was unconscious most of the time, but I gues its the only way to see Mokuba's full potential. Finally a fic where Mokuba comes into his own and is not just a bargaining chip ready to be kidnapped. Good to read one here. ^^ Well done.