*has a sugar overdose and dies*

I was going to review every single thing I liked about this fic, but since now I'm dead... honestly, I don't think I can remember them all. Just know that this moved me to the core. There were parts when I was close to tears and others where I felt like I melted into a pool of goo (that my mom would've had to clean tomorrow -ouch). The end was so beautiful! It does a wonderful work on summing up their relationship. You were also able to provide a rational explanation that _someone_ *coughanimewriterscough* did while probably ingesting a dose of the ilicit substance commonly known as crack. I applaud you.

[Snoosh note to self: Take all of Chrno's Ranma½ manga from him. He's starting to behave like the main character behind the scenes]

I, in all my smartness, have once again managed to press the 'Submit' button befor my review was over. For that, I deserve a brownie (and someone willing to do my science project). Now, for the continuation:

O.o You don't honestly mean to kill him, do you? No you don't. *smiles threatheningly* Right?

And then they just started making out in the train... Cool...

>.< A guilty Rosette is not something we see everyday... doesn't seem OOC, though. And you'd better fix this soon, and leave us with a WAFF.

I think what you said about Chrno feeling guilty for 'not being able to cause flowers to sprout spontaneously from the ground Rosette walks upon' is exagerated, though the anime Chrno _is_ a wimp *growls at the person who wrote the anime*

O.O WTF did you burn Chrno's finger for? That makes absolutely no sense for my little mind -or perhaps it does and I'm too tired to undertand it's meaning... yeah, that's probably it. At the moment, though. I don't understand (and find it freaky).

Aw, Rosette is so worried! Poor girl... it's really obvious how she cares about (dare I say love) him, but I guess it's kind of normal that she wants to keep it hidden. But what will she do?

Mew? Plant a little kiss in his mouth just like that? And he didn't react? Am I supposed to read Lechan's story to get it?

I had written a large review, honestly... but then I was smart enough to erase it accidentaly. I can't quite remember what I had written, but I believe it had something to do with reading Lechan's story even though I'm not old enough.

Then I said 'Aw, poor Chrno, it must be awful for him to be like that' And now I'll continue reviewing: Poor Rosette, too. And Chrno was so cute when he realised it had been only a nightmare. But it was so sad how he was thinking «I'm sorry, Rosette, but I'm glad you'll live for longer, I hope you find *coughanotherlovecough* Joshua. So sad.

...Oh, that explains it. Yeah, it must've been Elder. Talking about that, have you noticed how the Militia underwear is short bloomers in the manga, but panties in the anime? LOL, another proof of whoever-did-the-anime's stupidity. Did panties even exist at that time?


*trows heavy object at Chrno* You two-timer! Stop thinking on both of them! Your neck's gonna break, you know? =P

LOL stick figures XD But it kind of hard to understand the gypsy with that weird accent (now I know what my classmates feel when I'm doing a presentation).

*glares suspiciously* So, those evil points are the cause of all his evil sickness, aren't they? I see *shots them with Sacreds. Hits Chrno* Ups. *runs away before Rosette finds her*

Oou... So this is your first story? Mm... Interesting. It's a good story, not as good as your actual ones, but still pretty decent. Chrno sounds weird, though. I guess that's because I never imagined Chrno would act so... em... so... inhuman? I mean, it's like you remind us that he's not human and that sometime the way we act/behave/exist puzzles him. Interesting.

Very cool idea ^_^; Nicely written, original, nifty.

Ha! It's really good!

'zat makes a soul vhat ultimately separates you from a dead zing' I love this line...I bet it took you forever to write this. Haha! Good job, I love it!

Aw! That was so good! I didn't want it to end! Great job!

YAY! I really loved that story!

Whoa...this is a really great ficlet...It's like it's...flawless,if that's the right way to put it...
In other words...2 thumbs up!(Sry,I woulda given you more but that's the most I can give given the limitations of my body parts...And sry again that it's so long & pointless)

That was an excellent story. And...for once...in a millinia...not a single pinprick in the plot, and every single conflict made perfect sense. Minds and hearts and souls are always fighting (my just sort of run around in circles and occassionally run into each other) and anti-matter totally exists in my humble opinion. That was pretty damn harsh though. I actually like Magdalene...she intervened once when it really counted (Volume 5, if it wasn't Magdalene than hell if I know.) That was very in character...An all-around excellent piece of work.

Wow... That was pretty... I just finished reading it... I love that kind of relationship between Rosette and Chrno because they seriously need each other and the type of bond they have no one could possibly understand if they haven't experienced it... It's the kind of relationship I have with only my closest friends. No one can really understand it but the five of us need each other and simply knowing that the other person is there gives a comfort and reassurance that's almost scary.

The Gypsy lady's accent is also right on the mark. She really does speak that way. I love how you explained everything about Pandimonium (lilith?) and how she wants to protect her children, but goes about it in a really twisted sort of way.

I also loved how Rosette thought of Magdalen. In most anime it's all like 'Don't worry, I'll take care of him..'... I think in Rurouni Kenshin it's like that. All understanding and stuff. BUt Rosette is almost as possesive and passionate as any demon so instead of 'I'll take care of him' it's 'MINE! ALL MINE! Back off bitch!' Which is really cute.

What's also interesting (My friend Everfire looked this up) is that in the origional unedited bible (The bible before the english messed it up) Pandimonium (lilith) was Adam's fist wife, created to be his equal. But since Adam didn't want an equal Lilith left and God created Eve to be Adam's submissive. Because Lilith wanted to be equal she was cursed.

The origional Mary Magdalan who was possessed by seven demons was a prostitute. Ironic considering that she is one of the most holy of women. It sort of represents how Chrno lives. A Sinner living with the servants of God.

There is also a theory that Satan did not fall from grace because he wanted to rule heaven, it was because he loved God so much that he fell. Everything needs an opposite in order to keep the balance. Day and Night. White and Black. Male and Femal. Dominant and Submissive. Good and Evil. Angels and Demons. God and Satan. Because of this Satan isn't so much evil as a keeper of the balance. He is also known as the Tester who tempts people in order to test their souls and their ability to be able to stand in God's presence without being burned.

All of this can be found in a book known as the Apothica. The uncut bible is actually twice the size of what it is now. Creepy huh?

Wow... I babled a long time, but it just seemed interesting and I'm drawing all sorts of connections.

Good work and keep it up!

Stay safe
Stay healthy
Sincerely,

Starr

Whoa... I will review later because it's late at night and I'm getting yelled at but... FAVORTIE'S LIST!

Your story is truly amazing! I'm in awe with your story! I felt the pain they were going through and also you help us readers to picture every scene very well! You have talent and one hell of an imagination here! I really enjoy your story and I hope to see more in the future!