great job yeah! happy ending

Loved it! Great writer!

Aww! That was *so* sweet...I just love your new character KIREI! THIS WAS SO GOOD! Ja ne _

Now THIS ONE I like. No I take that back. I no where near like it. I LOVE IT! Wow that was awesome. Major Kudos! Keep up the good work. By the way WHO is the kiss-record timer anyway! o.0 Later. _

WHAT DID YOU DO! Everything was going so well, NOW YOU PULL THIS STUNT! AAAHHHHHHHHHH! OOHHH! I'm mad now. How could that happen, WHY, WHY DID KARLA FORCE HERSELF ON HIM AT THAT TIME! Duh, CUZ SHE'S A BITCH! Why did you write it like, THAT! Couldn't have been a little more subtle. I'm gonna cry now. KAMI! WHY! Besides this chapter the story rocks! OI! UGH! WHY!

LOL! I'm in love with the drunken Ami-chan. Good story!

well done write a other story

Awww! How sweet! I loved it!

I loved it.(*sniffle*)it was so romantic!

Love your fanfic girl,I liked the way you end it too,I hope you write more.Ja ne

oh this was sooooooooo sweet. :::sniff:::: stupid Karla. heh. _;;

that was sooooo sweet

Hey there! Those lines (you know what lines I'm talking about, don't you?) that Usagi and Mamoru... it WAS somewhat like the new version of the 'Parent Trap' when they're talking about Annie and Hailey. Only it's (I suppose): 'So what now? Do you expect me to crawl into your arms, crying hysterically? For us to get back together and tell each other that we can get through this, our daughters being raised here and there... Just starting where we left off...'

'Yes, but you don't have to cry hysterically.'

'Oh yes I do...'

Yeah, I've seen the movie over twenty-five times so, you know. Just pointing it out... Great story by the way! Keep on writing! Ja Ne!

Ms Anonymous

Damn! Another "Parent Trap" twist! Damn you! {I didn't really mean that. _}

Well, not bad... *growls* 'Cept for that goddamned TWIST! Okay, I'll stop screaming now. But truly, it was actually a good story... EXCEPT FOR THAT *BEEP* TWIST! Sowwies. I just hate those twists though! *Whines uncontrollably* I'll release you from my ranting and raving now... Just think about the "co-authoring" a fic with me... (I put that in my review of "Never Again")