|Reviews for The First Decree|
| Morte Cacciatore 4/28/13 . chapter 1
| Freya's Valhalla 11/14/12 . chapter 1
I really think there should've been more YoKei moments in the anime; they make such an awesome pair (and I don't mean it romantically).
Anyway, great fic, you've captured them very well and it looks like a natural conversation they could have had :)
| AnimeIceFox 1/31/12 . chapter 1
) That was cute! Good work!
| FireEdge 1/30/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. It was as if this was just a missing passage from the book. You captured their characters perfectly (Keiki was especially well done, I loved his habit of averting Youko's gaze-it's totally something he does), and Youko's rationalization of the First Decree reflected her personality well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and after reading it, it conveyed a strong sense of peace and closure. Thanks for the fantastic read!
| finem 10/22/06 . chapter 1
wow...it's not often that a fic leaves me smiling like this one did. I love this series because of all the political analysis, but mainly because of the relationships that are ensnared within the politics. You do an excellent job of creating that same feeling in this fic. Great job!
| Midnight Promise 8/17/06 . chapter 1
Another great fic. (I am having a lot of fun reading your TK fics, lol.)
Everyone was pretty much in character and there were little mistakes. (Like none. . .)
Anyway, good job and I am off to read more.
| dday 11/23/05 . chapter 1
This is very good. This would have made a perfect anime episode for the interlude after she made her decree. Hope you write some more.
| CallaRose4ever 11/21/05 . chapter 1
I like it! I wish I could read the books...no fair! Oh well. Can you imageine Keiki in a poker game? LOL
| Sarah8 11/20/05 . chapter 1
Awe that is so cute! That and I'm happy to see someone write how Keiki would have reacted. That was one thing I was disappointed by chapter 10 I didnt' get to see how Keiki would have reacted. Thank you! :)