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Psycho Tangerine
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
I got a bit confused at first until I realized this was AU and they were highschoolers. I didn't get how Alyssa's dad could force her to go to a college. She's the one who would have to apply to Yale, he couldn't do it for her. And, if she's now an adult (since she's college age)it's realy her decision. So I'm glad she stood up to him at the very end.
CrystallineSparks
2007-02-14 . chapter 1
Love the part where Cole said he wanted Alyssa back.Then Taylor went then get her.
Very cute and sweet story...so hold old was Alyssa when she was pregnant?
Third year of college...21 years old,right?
Kurumi-chan
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
Kawaii!Awsome possum!Not many do Cole/Alyssa as a couple, or write fanfics about them^^Thanx, I totally love it pleaseohpleaseohpleaseohplease do a sequel, your writing skills are superb keep up the good work=^.^=
Detective E. Yin
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
Oh yeah, Sequel... pls. I like this story, it's really good.
ttfn
Imagination Queen
Pink Crane
2006-01-30 . chapter 1
sweet
I for one love it
Please write a sequel
Arwennicole
2005-12-24 . chapter 1
O! A Sequel would be so cool. Cool story. Loved it :D.

Arwennicole
Miss Lizzy Bennet
2005-11-21 . chapter 1
Hey very nice! I liked it very much, I think that it was a little of wild force and dino thunder, I don't know, just 'cause of that thing of high school, but I liked it anyway, it's very different! And your fic is very good, it is your first fic, isn't it? Very nice, continue writing, you write very well.

So, Alyssa's father is very hard! Poor Alyssa and Cole, they are very sweet together, you wrote it very well, I mean the emotions and all. Well Alyssa and Cole aren't my favorite couple(Actually my favorite are Wes and Jen), but I like them, I think that they really are cute together.

And nice song! Good choice, I put this song in one of my fics, I really like it. Very nice.

I think that you should write more, you write very well. Just try don't put the exclamation in some pointes, just like "asked Taylor with a very serious face!" But that's all, you just did it in two scenes, nothing to worry about.

That's all! Continue writing! Your fics are very good! I'll add this fic to my favorites! Nice job, really nice! :)
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