Hihi. I'd like to say your story is absaloutly amazing. There are so many things I like about it:
1. I love how the ponies are obviously the ponies from the G3. You can tell who's who, but they don't nessecarily follow the movie personalities.
2. I like how it includes hasbro and explains the difference between dream valley and ponyville.
4. I like how it's well written. the puntuation and spelling is decent, true, but mostly, there's forshadowing, with a certain goal in mind. Amazing.

But, also theres a couple things I'm confused about, or don't like.
1. Do ponyville ponies reproduce differently from dream valley? because you said Dream valley ponies just use this mirror, but if they used a mirror, why would ponies like Lou have TWO parents?
2. Minty. Is her name coinciding with G1 pony just a coincidence?
3. Wind Whistler. Two things about her. First, Rose talked about a 'baby' Wind Whistler. She doesn't seem the type, also 'Baby' Wind Whistler was LYING about Dream castle. Strange Eh? Secondly, this is just a desperate plea from me. Could you please put her in the story more? I have trouble finding good stories about her!
Thanks for listening to my random review!
the (other) Megan!

I hope you come back to this story. It's fun and different and Sunny is just awesome. Seriously, she's really hilarious.

Hee hee, Sunny continues to crack me up. "I'm like a bug!" lmao Yes, I'm so glad they seem to be on their way to following Rose into Dream Valley.

The king is interesting. I remember having the pony he's based on. She came with the castle if I remember correctly. I like Starbeam too... but my favorites so far are Sunny and Lou.

I hope Sunny and the secret agent pony managed to follow them there somehow...

Gosh, I hope Sunny turns the boy ponny to the good side, then says something like "I have brought him to the light with me love! hee hee". It'd be vastly amusing.

Is Starbeam one of the princess ponies maybe? Hmm...

I don't think the sunny chapters are fillers it's more like a side plot. I rather like her myself. When she asked if the waterfire was blind I laughed out loud.

LOL That's a very creative explanation. I really like how Hasbro is a villian in this... it's not exactly fourth wall breaking, but its definitly nudging it in fun ways.

Aww, Lou's cute.

I was hoping for a long lost civilization... like maybe the four different types ponies seperated centuries before. The winged ponies could have had a castle in the sky...

I like Sunny. I hope she stays in the story.

Hmm I can't picture Rose Blossum's very well... maybe a little more description of the setting couldn't hurt. Still this is very different and entertaining.

LOL from Hasbro. That's cute.

Well, I don't have a favorite pony, but I do hope Rose blossum goes on a expedition and discovers a lost colony of winged ponies/flutter ponies/ or unicorns. That'd be cool.

Is this set during "My Little Pony Tales" with the original tv series being in their past? If so that's a neat idea. You're doing quite very for someone's first fanfic. I never would have guessed you hadn't written one before if you hadn't mentioned it.

Ah I've waited SO long for an update! :) And hey, I can't help but think of Silver Glow when I read about the blue pegasus! But I guess I'll have to wait and see, huh? ^-^ And yay for explanations on Majesty and Starbeam. I feel sorry for Majesty though, he looks like he cares for Starbeam and Lou. And ooh, what's happened to the flutter ponies? All in all, great chapter - and I hope the next update would come quicker! Hehe.