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| J Lesley 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI don't think I blinked the entire time I was reading this. I was, I guess, grasping on to the hope that he would let her help him, but alas things don't always have a happy ending. Anyway, this is very well written and the subtly of the details just drew me into the story, drew out the suspense. |
| Addicted1 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseYou're right--this is really dark, but it is also really well-written. You painted a vivid scene of Cuddy's pain and made it tangible. Thank you for posting. |
| QT Roo 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abusedark but well written. |
| Jaimi 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseMY GOD! My Heart was beating so fast, i thought it was real. It is really good! It is dark, but it is inciteful (dont know how to spell it) Love Jaimi |
| Little Lunar Wolf 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseArgh...that little organ on the left side of my chest is hurting at the moment. This was so beautiful, so very majestical, so loaded. You've really brought out the raw emotion of both characters so much so that I'm feeling it as well. Personally I really, really liked it. Masterful writing; well done. |
| prinnie 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abusethat was so well written but so sad!! i'm all teary! i hope you write more happy House/Cuddy fics! |
| Gomes 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseYou need to write an epilogue, fool. *snicker* Amazing! The ending just tore at my heart, forcing tears to my eyes. Very intense and extremely well expressed - enough to really touch the reader. Always a pleasure to read: thanks so much for sharing this, luvey! *hugs* |
| AilciA 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseYou may not have liked it, but I loved it! It was perfect and so very beautiful... good lord, you are good. I am going to see if you have done any more! Well done - incredibly sensitive and well-written |
| Review1234 2005-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI still have to review your other story, but, ack, the pace of life as it is now is sickening! Oh, yeah, this is Phrenology of a Waffle; I'm just a mysterious anonymous reviewer though... Shh. No, but really, how could you not like this story? You just wrote this down? Jeez, if I could do that... Wow. I am in awe over this; it's dark, and I like reading-- and writing-- dark. It's fun, except when your teacher is asking you about your dark writing, and you start laughing because you're nervous. Not that that has happened to me... *innocent whistle* Anyway, really, I love this story. It's going on my favorites; wow, it is just incredible! The emotion in the words, the life in the story, everything is so professional and well-written. Anyway, thank you for this piece of art, -- Picasso or Dali?-- and please, keep writing. ;) |
| Adalia Zandra 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI've just gotten sucked into Housefic this past week . . . and this is the first one I've felt the impulse to review. Very good story, thank you for sharing it. |
| Magdala 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseCan you rewind a little then continue. I did not want this to end although it is a neatly constructed one off short short story. |
| Tali-Sarah 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was simply beautiful. |