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saphirazure
2007-08-05
ch 9,
abuseyour story is so hilarious! but it still is very deep and thoughtful so its not just some parody gravi thing. i cant wait for an update!
Eevee
2007-04-09
ch 9,
abuseIf it wasn't 2 AM, I'd try to make this coherent. But in short:
I very much enjoy your characterizations - particularly, the fact that you aknowledge Shuichi's brain, Shuichi's backbone, and Shuichi's actual age. But most of all, I like the way you portrayed his friendship with Hiro. I also like Yuki a lot in this fic, and the subplot about Tatsuha's place in the Uesugi family is definitely a nice bonus.
chika
2007-02-01
ch 9, anon.
abuseI love it, definitaly one of my favourite fanfics. :o

PLEEAASSEE update ASAP.

KAYBYE!
princessares
2007-01-30
ch 9,
abuseOh. My God. That makes me wanna go all chibi-fied and wailing at the sheer sadness of a breaking, deep friendship.

I'm not only keen on finding out where you plan to take this, but *how*.

Have I mentioned how in love I am with your characterisation?
Ashcat
2007-01-24
ch 9,
abuseWa... I just love your writing and this is a great story! *hugs* :) I'm so glad you updated :D it was an interesting turn of events it keeps making me wonder where it's all going! Can't wait for more I hope you get more time to work on it!
Em-chan 01
2007-01-24
ch 9,
abuseThat was really good. Update soon!
DamagedPastBroken
2006-10-25
ch 8,
abuseI really liked it, the coat thing...nice. Keep up the wicked work and update asap.

SAlly the Stephs~
Ashcat
2006-10-25
ch 8,
abuseYAy an update :) I really really enjoy this story :D I was so happy to finally have some time to read the new chapter. O... the ** on the jacket was a spectacular idea - truly :) I can so see that happening between a couple heh the little digs we throw in there when we're fighting with someone you've been with that long... you had me trying to desperately hide my laughter as I read this on my lunch break at work!

I hope you can find more time to update as you're giong into summer vacation :) I can't wait to see what happens next!
gabrielle angelique
2006-10-21
ch 8,
abuseOh my...an update at last! Yuki's not serious isn't he? He's not really going to add to the circus right? Oh I love you! Please update soon!
nomadff7
2006-10-20
ch 8,
abuseI was so happy to see that you posted a new chapter! This story is really great and I have enjoyed reading it very much. I really like how you went into how Shuichi might resent Yuki for some of Bad Luck's success. That is a very interesting topic that I have not seen explored in any other stories. I think that you kept every one in-character and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!!
Niyari
2006-10-20
ch 8,
abuseYet another majestic chapter.

You have interesting viewponts. The issues between Tohma and Hiro and Shuichi and Yuki keep growing, but it's not an on-going plot ploy. Wonderfully sprinkled out between chapters. The real-life tone of this chapter really spoke to me. It seemed to play out in my mind, like a love scene in a good Television show.

The jacket bit at the end was especially cute. I can see Shuichi saying that and Yuki immediately throwing off the jacket.

Amazing tactic. Nice job, continue please... when you can!
Niyari
2006-10-20
ch 7,
abuseI cannot express to you how much I love this story.
The only think about this chapter is that Hiro's reactions to Shuichi's outbursts, their whole fight scene in other words... was a little corny. Just a little.

The ending was very well put together. Great job.
EmptyWord
2006-07-31
ch 7,
abuseThis is a wonderful ongoing fic, relationships and characters right on target. The tension between Shuichi and Hiro throughout is done really nicely, with the little hints and observations Shuichi makes, such as not being able to see Hiro's face behind the helmet. I wonder, Hiro's dates with Ayaka could be just a "pasttime" he picked up once Shuichi foudn Yuki and stopped spending as much time with him. I never would have pegged Shuichi as insecure, but it lines up with his extremely emotional personality. Lots of interesting stuff to chew on. More coming soon?
Dejichan4444
2006-07-26
ch 7,
abuseAWW! Hiro and Shu had a fight... *cries* But they made up! YAY! *hugs them* YOU ROCK!

Sorry about the short review, but I promise the next one will be better!
tian
2006-07-06
ch 7, anon.
abuseit's a really, and i mean really, amazing story. i adore it to a million little pieces. judging from all those little hints scattering across the chapters, i'd say you have some good plot in mind. i'd guess it's one-sided hiro/shuichi ( and i think yuki knows about hiro's unrequited love...); or maybe it's (hopefully one-sided) yuki/ayaka? either way, do please continue this fic, it's one of the best around here.

can't wait for more!
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