OMG this was beautiful i love this movie to death watch it everytime its on tv and this poem tell Mei story well

Very descriptive.

I can see it unfold in the my very eyes - the language is so powerful!

Congrats on an amazing poem xD

Wow. That was really good!

i love its GrEAT

Wow. I mean, wow. Beautiful. It would make a very dramatic and awesome song.

SO SWEET:D

This is a beautiful poem! Write more!

That was a good poem. I liked how you used the lines from the song. The lyrics are a bit sporadic and there doesn't seem to be a pattern for where you place them but they fit perfectly with the song. It works for this poem. You should write more.

Amazing; that was a really beautiful poem, and it had some very nice imagery. That's my prefered style of peotry, both in reading and writing, but you don't see much of this kind that's well written any more. This piece was refeshing and classic, yet original at the same time. Great Job!

*cries* This is so good!

That is so sweet! I love it! It's beautiful!

Aw, that's really sweet. You have a really musical rhythm to this poem,a nd I can just imagine the drum beats. Love it!

Sakina x

cool. I really like it. It defantly is a romancey type of poeam and althoe I really dont like romance well. wow.