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Reviews For: Rurouni Kenshin story

StarShipDelta
2005-11-21
ch 1,
abuseYou have a very interesting beginning here. Maybe just alittle bit rushed, maybe try including a bit more dialouge and scenery...but it's got me interested to see where you are going to take it next, keep it up!
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