That must have been so painful for Haru, but at least Rin broke up with him for a good reason, right? Beautifully written, I must say, and do keep up the good work.

Very, very nicely done. Even if this is old, I thought it was wonderfully described. Keep up the good work, kay Kiwi-chan? I love reading your stories :D

That was really really really really good! I loved it!

this is so believeable. thank-you for writing a believable haruxrin story! keep, writing 'kay.

Beautiful. It's so interesting to see how many different people have different ideas as to how Rin broke up with Haru. And I love your take on it. Once again, beautiful.

-Red Skye

It's good. For being a drabblish-one-shot, it was well written. Not as good as it possibly could be, but still, good. I liked it, even though Rin and Haru are most deffinately not my favorites. Keep up the good work.

Kurai

_ Aww. Poor Haru. Darn you, Rin!

::sigh:: Now, I order you to go write a Akito x Shigure fanfic! Please?

Short, but well-written. I enjoyed it, but a little more detail wouldn't have hurt. Good job.

Aww, that was beautiful! Wonderful way of retelling this scene, in a way I'd never thought of. :]

very good i like it.

i liked it but why does it always have to be short personly HAtsuharu is my fav character and he is not in frutis basket engough witch makes me sad lol i sound like such a baby but i love your description like for ex)Hatsuharu sighed, and blew white hair out of his grey eyes.

that rocked i guess harus hair is mostly what represents him lol but anywho this was short but good but also a little depressing im not trying to put you down but if you are going to wright a story why dont u make the main part the biggest part becuse then its kind of like a cliff hanger teehee _ and unless your excpetcting on makeing a squell then dont make it so short but good effort LOVED IT! if oyu ahve any comments about my reviewing my e-mail is - plz send me an email

Hott. Very, vert hott.

That was excellent, bravo.

That rocked.

Nice. Very good.

This was very good and it's okay to not have much information. It happens.

Sanrio-chan