|Reviews for Unsuspecting|
| RaiderTKD 11/20/07 . chapter 1
That must have been so painful for Haru, but at least Rin broke up with him for a good reason, right? Beautifully written, I must say, and do keep up the good work.
| KarenaWilliams 5/25/07 . chapter 1
Very, very nicely done. Even if this is old, I thought it was wonderfully described. Keep up the good work, kay Kiwi-chan? I love reading your stories :D
| 0-Crimson-0-Nightshade-0 8/31/06 . chapter 1
That was really really really really good! I loved it!
| Serinity's angel 8/22/06 . chapter 1
this is so believeable. thank-you for writing a believable haruxrin story! keep, writing 'kay.
| Red Skye 7/28/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. It's so interesting to see how many different people have different ideas as to how Rin broke up with Haru. And I love your take on it. Once again, beautiful.
| Kurai Himitsu 7/24/06 . chapter 1
It's good. For being a drabblish-one-shot, it was well written. Not as good as it possibly could be, but still, good. I liked it, even though Rin and Haru are most deffinately not my favorites. Keep up the good work.
| StormHornet 7/4/06 . chapter 1
_ Aww. Poor Haru. Darn you, Rin!
::sigh:: Now, I order you to go write a Akito x Shigure fanfic! Please?
| Pirate Monkey 6/3/06 . chapter 1
Short, but well-written. I enjoyed it, but a little more detail wouldn't have hurt. Good job.
| numbuhweirdo 5/22/06 . chapter 1
Aww, that was beautiful! Wonderful way of retelling this scene, in a way I'd never thought of. :]
| kandy luv 1/20/06 . chapter 1
very good i like it.
| tiara 1/2/06 . chapter 1
i liked it but why does it always have to be short personly HAtsuharu is my fav character and he is not in frutis basket engough witch makes me sad lol i sound like such a baby but i love your description like for ex)Hatsuharu sighed, and blew white hair out of his grey eyes.
that rocked i guess harus hair is mostly what represents him lol but anywho this was short but good but also a little depressing im not trying to put you down but if you are going to wright a story why dont u make the main part the biggest part becuse then its kind of like a cliff hanger teehee _ and unless your excpetcting on makeing a squell then dont make it so short but good effort LOVED IT! if oyu ahve any comments about my reviewing my e-mail is - plz send me an email
| Guest 12/15/05 . chapter 1
Hott. Very, vert hott.
That was excellent, bravo.
| lily23 12/14/05 . chapter 1
| Danyu 12/13/05 . chapter 1
Nice. Very good.
| Sanrio-chan 11/27/05 . chapter 1
This was very good and it's okay to not have much information. It happens.