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| Angelalex242 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting implications. They said elsewhere that he felt like Aerith sent Denzel to him. And it's curious, isn't it, that Denzel has blue eyes and brunette hair, isn't it? One begins to wonder if Denzel's a 1/4 Cetra... |
| Lutearina 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was very gorgeous! ^__^ And to those people who are like "RETARDED! DURR!" I'd like to see you write better. ;) I love the ending. Those kinds of endings are just...So sad/kawaii at the same time. ^__^ *feels all fuzzy XD* |
| lena-jade 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I was sort of confused at the transition, but I love the poignant desciprtions and sentence structure. It's sweet, and it seems like you really can get in Cloud's head. The ending I absolutely adore: 'Denzel...he's a lot like me. But he's so much more like you, Aerith. He's so much more like you.' Beautiful. There couldn't have been a more perfect ending. I look forward of a more novel-length fic from you, since you plan on writing one, right? ;) |
| Shadow Chakra 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHiya, Difinity! You might know me as "Paladin's Heart" in the CxA forums. Your story really warmed up my heart. It was very descriptive and had such a deep feeling for Cloud's thoughts on Aerith. Perfectly, If I could, I could cry! I read some of the other reviews and I saw that some people had sad some pretty mean things, ne? Must be CloTi's. XD. Love your story, Great job! ^_^ |
| Final Fantasy Princess 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it. You depict Cloud perfectly and how he feels. It makes me want to tear up. Great job. |
| AmayaSaria 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWonderful job...I loved it! It was beautiful! ::wipes away a tear:: |
| vashsunglasses 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a wonderful way to see Denzel... I love this story. |
| Madame Batolli 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseGoregous. Difinity, you really did a fantastic job, and the ending lines are especially poignant. I love your writing style, keep it up! |
| zoro 2005-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseits really good so many feeling inside and i like the ebd part the best "Denzel...he's a lot like me. But he's so much more like you, Aerith. He's so much more like you. " ah and that cloudlover just ignore him/her, he always flame aerith and cloud ficc ^^ dont worry ur story is good :P |
| mystic-Hoshi 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abusewowow! good interpretation of why Denzel had an important role! =) nice story! |
| Yimiyo 2005-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's okay ^^ a bit hard to grasp at times, though. |
| Luna-Nayru 2005-11-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, this was such a nice way to portray the breath of fresh air Cloud's "meetings" with Aerith provide in AC. I've already told you this, but I love this little story so much. Simply beautiful. *adds to faves* ^_^ Now, where did I leave my troll mallet...? |
| Ardwynna Morrigu 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was rather sweet. I especially like the end with the children gathering around. Cloud may be finally ready to move on with his life, but we know Aeris will always be special to him. You captured that with a quiet simplicity. It's not a bad little story at all. |
| Scatter Plot 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all ignore the fanfiction trolls. Their reviews were in no way helpful. People like them insult others because their stories aren't worth an inch of site-space. Yes the story had flaws, but over all I thought it was quite charming. You chaptered the saddness and hope of Cloud's memories perfectly. I also like the musings on Denzel, the boy is rather mysterious so it's great when authors shed some light on him. I especially loved the ending lines! "Denzel...he's a lot like me. But he's so much more like you, Aerith. He's so much more like you." Keep writing! |
| CloudLove3r-In-Your-Face 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseOk k k k k-that was retarded. I have no idea who the hell POV's it was. Sometimes it was Cloud and another I have no idea. Plus the whole Aerith death crap is over done--do yourself a favor a be original. YAWN -Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah ha ha |