Nice story. Really like what you wrote. Can't wait for your next story.

O.O

Woah... just... WOAH... I mean, like, who said,
"Fox? Fox?...Fox!"
and
"He's Dead."

Whoa... That story was pretty unexplained, but I kinda got the message. Poor Fox, it must've been pretty ** him... I really loved this story, good job!

right more

Hey Amber, good to see you.

I suppose you don't remember me?

Ah, well, no matter.

Excellently written fanfiction, at times it was a bit too matter of fact however. You had all this emotional dialogue, but once or twice the description was a bit too static.

The other times, I liked how you used opposites via commas. I love that style, I use it a lot in my writing.
Eg, "All the anger he had ever felt, all the love he had ever felt."

Great job, you're going on my favourites.

PS: Shades Of Grey (my newest SF fic, which is a sequel to my now completed The Greatest Fear) is coming out 21'st of December, would you mind reading and reviewing?

he die how sad but what it to me i have his soul now in the darknes...

what the hell am i talking about

this was good do some more dude now where that chesecake i been looking for...?

Holy crap, good job. Deep sad, but they're both happy now right?