Well...hmm... some wonderful imagery in this piece. A really heart-wrenching story and I can only guess that it was Dumbledore (was it?) But at first I thought it was Malfoy. Actually I'm quite proud that I worked that one out!

Stick with it, this is an amazingly well written piece of unseen History however confusing I found it to be at first and I hope you have more for us from where it came from.

Galleena

*sniff* This is so great! So sad...

Congrats on another tear inspiring oneshot. (if it is, indeed, a oneshot)

-exile

brilliant. i've never seen an idea like this one. and you did a great job with it.