cute...- but thats not why I reviewed. Please don't take this rudly, but Phinelle is spelled Fanel. - just incase you didn't know. and Vahn is spelled Van. - a thousand apoligies if I've offended you, but I just thought that you may want to know. *-*

I love it! It's magical the way you write your poems! I know that probably most people who revewd this story already must have said it that Van's name is spelled this way: Van Slanzar De Fanel

good but you spelled van slanzer de fanel wrong.

I LOVE IT! Only and mostly because I'm totally and completely in love with Van, but i just wanted to let you know that I love it.

VAN SLANZAR DE FANEL

this was a really good poem, but u spelt Van Slanzar de Fanel wrong.