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| otakubandgeek 2008-02-28 ch 1,  | abuseYou used my favortite method of suicide!! Oding on Happy Pills! Way to be! |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseAw...angsty... Loved how you totally didn't kill him. |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusei think ive read this a few times and never reviewed which is weird... i normally do... oh well... you see the poetry like bit, that greg says... is that new... or has that always been there...? oh well... nice ending... i really want to give him a hug... and hugging the computer just isnt the same... |
| Radical Pretense Gothica 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAw...sappy... |
| Gotsta Have My Hardy 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. I want to write something better but all I think ...well... wow! This story made me cry a bit. (In a good way)(wait is crying able to be interprited as good?) I really hope you mabey add or write new Greggo angst. ~Amber Betingfield~ |
| Leah Sanders 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseBest story ever, Hey anymore chapters coming up? |
| I never promised 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! |
| Alicat Sanders 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abusei have read this twice before...im sure i commented before, i dont see why i wouldnt have..hmm anyway i can review again!! this is really good, you have a good sense of characters and their lifes. I loved the Sara thing, simply amazing!! I'm so glad that you are my sister although you do give me some competetion writing wise lol. Nevermind now we are partners in crime for this TV show. I'm going to send out the pilot in th summer if you don't mind. get us started on this thing before i go to University ( hopefully in Chicago!!). \cant wait to be watching the pilot with you, it will so totally rock socks. better go, else this will be a bloody essay lol. oh and is that the poem you wrote? how do you do it! my poems all suck, anyway my nose aches and i get the day off tomorrow! Miss u so much words cant explain, hope you smile when u read this sis, love me...best big sis in the world ( ah who am i kidding lol) :) |
| sapphirerosha110 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI've been going through the morbid, everyone-dies-someday-and-I'll-probably-die-alone-because-I-can't-get-a-boyfriend phase. Everything my friends said was almost identical to what Sara said. Reading this fanfiction has done more to shock me out of what I'm going through than everything my friends have been saying for the last three weeks. Thank you. |
| karmine 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abusegreat story loved it! (i dont think would ever attempt suidce) |
| Babybanana 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreg!! Noo!! I'm so happy you didn't kill him..! You can't Kill my Greggo!! |
| CSI Dork 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseHey! I really liked this story. I like a bit of angst and I think it could so be part of Greg's character. He's so happy go lucky all the time, surely there must be something beneath the surface. I think it's really cool that you explored this idea. Well done. CSI Dork. |
| SammieCSIMiami 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abusei was in tears I though you'd accualy killed him! |
| CSIslave 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuselol, hey, I don't see WHO would flame you. This is a really beautifully written story. I feel so sorry for Greggo... you're just like Alice! you want him so bad, yet you just LURVE to put him in pain! you have very good word choice! I think you did a wonderful job with this story. |
| Dane 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou show promise as an author, but this story felt rushed and, at brief times, unrealistic. I think you should spend a bit more time developing your characters and plotline; your readers would have a better read. |