Excellent story! I had a great time reading it. Very humorous.
Congrats! Lots of stars!

Very cute. Great job.

Very nice!! Love Lorne's voice.

Aw. This was such a sweet story. Even the bumps and bruises didn't detract from the cuteness. I love your Lorne voice.

I love your story! But Major Lorne is a major in the U.S. AirForce, not the U.S. Marines. Besides, I don't know if 'major' is even a rank in the Marines. Other than that, your story is great! :)

Great story.

That was awesome, i was practicaly yelling "A SHIP, A SHIP!, THEY HAVE A SHIP!" lol. nice work with the Lorne POV.

An excellent story! I loved it!

Just me again, stopping by to say thanks!! Very nice one...

amazing! i love lorne stories!

Great story! Lorne's POV is a nice, fresh take on my favorite characters.

*happy sigh* Really, really good, and yeah, that must get old, hearing it over and over again, but I'm really into seeing our heroe's through other character's perspectives, so this was a specially tasty treat for me *huge grin*

I love this story and have read it on two different occasions now. I really like Lorne, both on the show and in your very very apt story. Great job.

aw... I really liked this :-). I loved all the babysitting references and as the oldest of seven I know just how frustratingly contrary and obstinate children can be ;-) I loved the plot and I thought the characterisations were great :-)

An excellent addition to the POV series.

It had the great mix of peril, snark, bickering and downright hilarious that I've come to expect from this series. You always get the characters so well, especially John and Rodney.

What I also liked about this one was the fact that I've not yet seen any of season two, so don't know Lorne, but I still got a great sense of who he is from this story, with some good background info and his particular view of the McKay/Sheppard dynamic and the running theme of being a babysitter.

Great stuff.